Batch Four  Imperfect exo_verdose

Title (5/10)
Upon the first glance I didn't hate or love your title.  There wasn’t anything remarkable or overwhelming memorable about it as it was a tad bit boring and very much unoriginal.Especially when writing about a popular band like EXO, that you try to pick a title that would stand out among the hundreds upon hundreds of stories. As I began to read deeper into your story, it seemed related to the story when compared the main plot of your description.


Foreword/ Description (8/10) 
The description was quite okay for my taste. It was't too long or short. You give a one setence preview about all the characters' lives. It takes a particular writer to be able to give the audience a proper portrayal of the story without revealing too much or too little. You did quite a good job here as I was interested to read your story. 


Characterization (7/10)
I did not get a strong impression of the characters' personality. You ou