Story Title : A lamb's demon
Author:  thecrownedraven
Reviewer: Tangledlove

Title (9/10)
Honestly, the title sounds catchy and interesting. The title goes really well with the story! I think the title suits the story so far. Creative but sometimes I have to think about how the story relates to the title. But I can't judge you in relevancy of the story as it hasn't been completed yet. 

Story descripton (10/10) 
Short but filled with great information for a description. The description seems very complete ... It helps a lot to understand the story! You really know how to attract readers like me by not giving everything away in the description. Even though i don't like character charts, it seems okay in your story as it doesn't reveal anything about the story. 

OVerall appearance (5/5) 
I think thet poster  really fits well with the story. It gives off a mysterious feel and just by one look, readers will know that they will need to be prepared for something angsty and dark. I have the say the poster is really well made. I was impressed by how suiting the whole overall appearance was! The background picture and poster fit so perfectly with the story theme

plot (23/25) 
I’ve never read a story like this, so I think the plot is very unique. The plot of this story is… different. I can't judge in this area as the story is imcomplete. Though so far, I feel that your plotline has potential but how it will be in the end,