Batch Two Review
The Last Day by Imagination_tofu Story Title: The Last Day    Author:  Imagination_Tofu   Summary: 
 Ever since you are young you suffer from a weird disease. Your family doctor have been trying to help you find a medicine that will help you to live longer and healthier. When you were 5 , your family doctor found the medicine and you have been taking that medicine since then.

On the day you turn 8 ,your parents got into an car accident and died due to the lost of blood , your family doctor decided to take you into his family and raised you as his own child.

You are 18 years old this year and you were told that you are going to transfer into a new high school. What will happen after you meet a handsome guy name Baekhyun 

Reviewer: TangledLove
Story Title : (8/10)
The title grips my attention and gives me mysterious aura about the title. 
Being mysterious is good even though it's not a mystery fiction. 
The title is unique and I feel that it's kind of cliche in some ways. 
Another point is that I don't really understand the title because it doesn't 
relate to the story much.  -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Foreword and Description: (6/10) 
I don't really like the colorful introduction even though they make a good presentation. But you used
too much color,so I kind of lost my interest. 
And when I read the description, I saw a weird disease. It doesn't look professional. Maybe
use the word "unusual" or "uncommon".
The title is mysterious but the description is not that mysterious because of your use of words. 
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