Batch Three Review
 Of Sunshine and Flower Boy by whiteknight

Story Title: Of Sunshine and Flower Boy 

Author: whiteknight 

Story Summary:
Story about Chanyeol, a naughty psychiatric patient having a huge crush towards Kris, his handsome doctor.

Reviewer: TangledLove

 

Title (8/10)

I like of...and... titles but your title doesn't grip my attention that much. Also I am not sure how the title relates to the story. 

 

Foreword and Description (5/10)

I think foreword is a bit vague because you don't really talk about the plot. One sentence which is your description doesn't grip my attention. It doesn't seem mysterious and make me want to read the story. 

 

 

Characterization(9/10)

The characterization wasn't bad at all. Everyone's personality was shown relatively well, and you didn't just gave everyone the personality that fit them quite well.

 

Plot / Storyline (25/25)

The plot was quite creative and you did stay on topic mostly throughout your story. The plot was definitely nice something I wouldn't have imagined.

 

Flow  (10/10)

The flow went well, everything was nice. I definitely loved the tempo.

 

Appearance (5/5)
The poster was great, the colors and the font was great. 

 

Grammar (25/30)

Your writing style is quite normal, nothing bad to say, but I wouldn't say it's very praisable. Though maybe if you wrote with more detail, it would've been much more exciting to read, maybe even get m