Batch Three Review
Vampire's Love by christine3006

Story Title: Vampire's Love

Author: christine3006

Story Summary:  
What if love can change a person?
A story which shows how a normal girl's life will be changed due to her past
The girl, starring Park Nayoung was a normal high school student but not until she found out her past
Her past that she will never imagine
When she need to find out who killed her sister
When she need to deal with her past
When she will fall in love with a different level's mate
When she will be betrayed by the person who she trusted a lot

 

Reviewer: TangledLove

 

 

 

Title (6/10)
Honestly, the title is very common in AFF for vampire stories.  I feel like the title is throwing the whole plot to my face, so the title doesn't really catch my attention. There is no hidden meanings behind it but it gets straight into the point which makes the title relates to the plot.

 

 

Foreword and Description (6/10)

I believe the foreword will grab the readers' attentions by itself because the readers want to find out about her past but I feel like you reveal her past in the characters' chart in the foreword, so it gets boring as I read the two chapters.

 

 

Characterization(5/10)

I don't actually know what to feel about main characters and side characters. A