Batch Three Review
It Takes Two To Love by wonsung4ever and iedanoeonline

Story Title: It Takes Two To Love

Author: wonsung4ever and iedanoeonline

Story Sumarry: 
When the two strangers met, can the loves sparks between them?

Reviewer: xxshininglight

 

 

Title (7/10)

This title really suits your story so I’m giving it seven out of ten. It doesn't seem attractive but I thought the title is quite okay. 

 

Foreward and Description (5/10)

The description is short and sweet, conveys the appropriate amount of information and doesn’t give too much away. I wondered about "something and someone waiting for him unwillingly" when I read that since it sounds quite mysterious. Still it lacks of presentation and it doesn't want me to read the story that much.

 

Characterization(6/10)

You did protray the characters' feelings and thoughts but it isn't enough in my opinion. Also, the characters are cliche and mary sue. Kris being cold and OC girl being poor. I can’t tell the full development of the characters and therefore unfortunately, I deducted some points. 

 

Plot / Storyline (12/25)

I mostly focused on the plot a lot and when I first read, it was arrange marriage. So I wasn't interest in that much. The events in the story is really cliche and I don't really enjoyed it that much. I fe