Inexplicable by exoexoexolellel

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Inexplicable by exoexoexolellel Story Title:  Inexplicable   Author: exoexoexolellel   Summary: 
Smart, top of the class Kim Taeyeon gets grounded for two months because of her shopping spree. No phone, no laptop, not even allowed out of the house! However, Taeyeon is offered an escape. Her mum asks her to tutor Byun Baekhyun; the hottest boy in school. Taeyeon sees him as a jerk and is reluctant to tutor him. But would you rather tutor a bad boy, or stay grounded for two months?

Reviewer:  TangledLove
Story Title : (8/10)  It looks interesting and grabs my attention but I am not sure how it relates to the storyline.
But I guess I will find out more later.  -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Foreword and Description: (8/10) 
I would put the conversation between Taeyeon and her mom after the introduction. 
It's just my preferences. The presentations are good even though I am not 
a fan of character charts. You keep it simple, so good job!  -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Characterization: (9/10)
There are a lot of hot boys and ordinary girls stories out in AFF but I like the way
you make Taeyeon have
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