Batch Three Review
The Balance Between Perfect and Imperfect by TheMusiclove258

Story Title: The Balance Between Perfect and Imperfect

Author: TheMusiclove258

Story Sumarry: 
Society has a line of division for beauty. Everyone is either considered a Perfect or an Imperfect. 

Reviewer: Baozi12

 

 

Title (5/10)

The title is dull and it doesn't look creative or catchy. There are a lot of imperfect and perfect titles in AFF,so it's hard for the readers to notice it. I wouldn't click on the title to be honest. 

 

Foreword and Description (6/10)

There is nothing interesting in the foreward at all. There is nothing that interest the readers because like I stated, there are a lot of perfection and imperfection stories. We alll know that the girl is imperfect and the boy is perfect. It happens a lot in the story. The authors always make the girls imperfect and the male idol perfect as a god. The only thing I like about the foreword is that it doesn't tell a lot about the story, so it seems a little mysterious. And I also like these two sentences. So I would give a bonus point for that. 

Only hoping for harmony.

To vanish the line of division.

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