Batch Three Review
 My Little Collection by xxhunhan101xx

Story Title: My Little Collection 

Author: xxhunhan101xx​

Story Summary:
Luhan likes collection confessions, he accepts hearts, yet never treasures them. What happens when a handsome boy named Sehun becomes his next "toy?" Will Luhan enjoy his toy, or will it be the other way around... 

Reviewer: TangledLove

 

Title (8/10)

The title isn't exactly eye catching.To me it feels sort of plain. At first I though it's a one shot collections. It does go along great with the story, though and I realized that it's a good title for the story. 

 

Foreword and Description (8/10)

Your foreword was definitely interesting. It had made me wonder about the story. It was short, and not too lengthy to the point it revealed to much, but it was enough to have the reader hooked. Definitely nice. But you could do more to get the readers' attention fully. 

 

 

Characterization(7/10)

The characterizations are fine. However, there were times where you really could have given more details and explanation. Even just a few extra sentences of details adds a lot to the quality of a character.  

 

Plot / Storyline (20/25)

The plot wasn't the most original plot in the world and it was quite cliche actually. Setting in High school but being a playboy.  But it was a nice one as he