Batch Two Review
10 Things I Love About Youby alicheungmsss Story Title: 10 Things I Love About You   Author: alicheungmsss   Summary: 
Ara is forced, or is more like expected to marry the Earl of Newbury. The heir presumptive to the Earl of Newbury, Luhan meets Ara in an unexpected situation. Will he be able to save Ara from this tragic marriage or will Ara be forced to compel to the expectances of society?

Reviewer: 
Story Title : (8/10) 
The title doesn't look very catchy and it doesn't look unique since it's a common title. 
There is a story called "10 things I Hate About You" and  stuff, so there are 25% chance
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ForeWard and Description: (7/10) 
The first paragraph of the foreword makes sense and it ties to the story in some way. You talks about the 
characters' personalities.  You should really write your author note in the foreward and the paragraph about Luhan 
and Ara should in description because it looks really interesting and it does grip my attention. 
You forgot period after "Families are complicated"
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Characterization: (7/10)
Those kind of characters for arranged marriage are so old fashioned and there are a lot of characterizations in AFF but
you put some troubled relations between the families. I like Luhan's character because I have been in his shoes in
prologue but I am not sur