Batch Four   Forever With You by BAPisPerfect

Title (6/10)
In terms of length, grammar, and capitalization, the title is fine. However, in terms of creativity and memorability, there is not much. There are more than a dozen of fictions with the same title as yours. However, it immediately captivated my attention and relates to the story. 

Foreword/ Description (9/10) 
The description is inviting. It doesn’t reveal too much. However, I think it could have been a bit more captivating. It’s good the way it is, I just have this feeling that it could have been more “catchy”.

Characterization (9/10)
In my opinion, you did a wonderful job with characterization.I must say that the characters were all creative, believable and with unique personalities. They’re all pretty well developed and they do relate to the plotline and theme. 

Plot/Storyline (24/25)
When I first started reading it I was worried that it would be pretty cliché but you did awesome. Even though it