Batch Two Review
Our Love Story by Imagination_tofu Story Title: Our Love Story   Author:  Imagination_tofu

Reviewer:  TangledLove
 
Story Title : (6/10) 
Your title is very common. It doesn't attract me as a reader or maybe it's just me that I read a lot of stories like that and I got bored.
But it fits the story line in a way, so it's okay.    -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Foreword and Description: (8/10) 
It's colorful and very descriptive. I prefer short description since it doesn't give away the whole storyline. 
And I like the way you keep your character chart simple. It doesn't give away the whole plot 
But to draw readers in, I would use some big fonts  and make it different color. 
For example: 
Your family's business is suffering through a financial problem, and just when hope seems too bleak, the richest corporation is willing to lend your family a helping hand. However, there is one condition. For you to marry the family's son. It doesn't seem like a problem, but what will happen if you find out that he's a total jerk?!   Will you just keep quite and tolerate him or will you break this deal??​   Presentation in the description and foreword is important, so the people won't give up in the half way of the description.   -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Characterization: (7/10)
I have nothing against the girl being nice and boy being a jerk story but it's really common in asianfanfics.  
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