It's all about the Little Things by B2utyful-ELf

Title (7/10)
First of all, I don't really like the title because of some of the reasons. Firstly, I felt that it's a flat story title. It doesn't excites you or make you feel that it's a special/interesting feel to it. Secondly, the title feels rather long and draggy, there's just too many syllabus in the title. Lastly, I'm not sure if it's the best title you can come up with. The connection of the story was alright. I think it isn't the best title for the story but it's an alright title since no one really have it so it's unique.  

Foreword/ Description (10/10)
 The description and foreword page was organize, not too wordy and interesting! I love how you wrote both your description and foreword! For your description, it was simple and it got my interests. For your foreword, it was personal and organize.

Characterization (6/10)
Othen than the basic statistic of the main character, it's lacking in characterization. The characters are quite vague. 

Appearance (5/5)
The poster looks great, I really love the poster even though