Batch Two Review The Abandoned Wolf by TheFourLittleDevils
Story Title: The Abandoned Wolf
Author: TheFourLittleDevils
Summary: Since young, never was Kyungsoo treated properly. He was often bullied and laughed at because Kyungsoo is weak. His parents taught him how to fight and defend himself but Kyungsoo could never hurt anything that is alive. That is just who he is. Weakling, was the nickname his old pack called him and that was always how he thought himself to be. Until he met the DarkMoon pack.
Reviewer: TangledLove
Story Title : (8/10) There are 50/50 chance that I will click on the title. It doesn't look quite appealing since there are many titles about wolves. But it was linked to the story so you did a pretty good job here.
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Foreword and Description: (6/10) The descriptions are simple and yet interesting. I grips my attention but when I looked though the characters' charts, it kind of discourages me to move forward since there are a lot of of information. I am not really a fan of character charts since it kind of giveaway the story. For example, when you explained the EXO characters, I already knew that Kyungsoo will be getting along with other members. And the profile of Kyungsoo should be somewhere sad but he is smiling, so it kind of throws me off.
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