“Ambiguous” By: Ddeokbxkkii.
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By:Ddeokbxkkii.
Reviewer: Gtoprenaissance
1-Title: “Ambiguous” is an interesting title, very unique and promising. Since the story carries the theme of friendship and relationship, the title is a bright method of drawing the audience into constructing their own conclusion regarding the ending of each chapter. I couldn’t have chosen a better title!
Rating: [5/5].
2-Description/Foreword: There’s not much to be said regarding the description and foreword portion of your story. The description was useful and sufficient as it cleverly illustrates the background, which readers are always curious about. It sets a clear canvas for the audience to paint their own ending and I think that’s brilliant.
Rating: [10/10].
3-Plot: The beginning grew with a respectable speed; there was enough time and room for each event to develop. I did wish for a stronger choice of words, or perhaps a more effective synonym of certain adjectives; it captivates the reader in a romantically picturesque environment. Since your story is titled “Romance” and “Friendship” that means that each of the two characters is of equal value. So, when delivering a certain message embedded in the form of romance, make sure to mention each emotion that the character is going through. I know you’ve done that already, it is only not as powerful when it is being transcribed from the point of view of an author. The point is, try to enter each possible mindset of common readers and demolish the generic image of cliché romance. Be creative and wild with unexplored ideas, otherwise, every romantic story on this platform would be labeled as a winner. Don’t be afraid to have a character become flawed or so, it makes them appear more lively and relatable; that is of significant importance nowadays.
The matter of crossroads between romance and friendship is wildly discussed. That means it is easy for your story to become forgotten or neglected. However, do not be discouraged by that fact, you can gift your beautiful story an even more beautiful shape by adding surrealistic experiences, such as: Nightmares, psychological illness or inner conflict. Your character will reveal its diversity as to merely sticking to the adorable/fluffy persona.
I’ve also noticed that on frequent occasions, you seem to be intimidated by delving into risqué ideas or situations,
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