“Save Me”

By: TaekenByJungoo

Reviewer: Gtoprenaissance.

-First of all, thank you for choosing this shop again, I'm honoured to review another story by such a beautiful author like yourself!

1-Title: Titles of literary works functions as an introduction to the story which will unfold whence the title is perceived, it leaves a permanent impression on the readers. “Save Me” though generic-sounding, it leaves a hint of nostalgic drama which speaks of a melancholic storyline. It’s not by any means special nor it is the most interesting title ever, but it will ask the readers to read further into the story in order to understand “Who is saving whom?”

Rating: [8/10].

2-Description/Foreword: Though the description is only two phrases long, it pretty much demonstrates everything which needs to be understood by the nature of the boys’ relationship/friendship. It’s simple and brief yet it bestows a strong effect on the readers. As for the cover, it is utterly beautiful and suitable for the general theme of the story.

Rating: [10/10].

3-Plot: The beginning is interesting; I can see how it might grasp the attention of many readers. The melancholic briefing of the speaker’s character and background stimulates a proper introduction into the story; you can do so much from that point on. So far, the storyline is brilliant, calm and beautifully balanced. It is critical for a literary work to possess a pleasing amount of scenery descriptions, for example, you could illustrate further the library which both characters occupied in the beginning; what does it look like? Does the place carry a certain scent? Has the character visited this place before? Is there any significant importance of this place to the character? Those questions not only help work as a filling between conversations and events, it’s also helpful for the readers to understand how to perceive this location.

The story shouldn’t progress in the way you made it to be, the main character’s mental issues is one of the very few elements your story possesses, so don’t misuse it by merely grazing over it so casually. I suggest that you go back to where the main character alerts the other character of his “cutting” or mental di