Chapter 44

Department X

Its been a few days since Yuri had moved in to stay with them and things were normal. Taeyeon would breath a sigh of relief at the end of each day because she's glad no mercenaries have appeared in their cafe trying to kill everyone. She seriously didn't want to put Sooyoung's plan in action because it was too risky and Taeyeon didn't like having one of her members take such a risk. To her, everyone in department x was like a family member and to lose one of them would be too big a sacrifice to make. Plus, Sooyoung was Sunny's baby sister. If anything happened to her, Sunny would probably want to follow after her footsteps and that was something Taeyeon definetely not want to see.

Sooyoung on the other hand had to keep up the pretense of being a little kid in front of everyone so as not to arouse any suspicions towards her. She continued playing and fooling around with Yoona in the cafe and stealing food whenever she can but her eyes was different. She was always on the lookout for one of her father's men and it got so bad that even Yoona suspected something wasn't right. Luckily for her, she always managed to brush it off using tiredness as an excuse.

It was a normal morning in the cafe as Taeyeon busied herself in the kitchen and Seohyun and Hyoyeon were busy cleaning table and ushering guests in with Sunny. People came and go and some found spots in the cafe and sat down enjoying their coffee. Sooyoung was hugging Yoona in their little corner and their eyes were locked on the laptop in front of them and giggling every now and then. Jessica and Yuri were stuck behind the bar as they fixed cups after cups of coffee for the busy morning crowd. No one noticed a man walking into the cafe and setting a bag down in one of the hidden corners. 

Taeyeon brought yet another batch of cupcakes and walked to the display cabinet. Setting the tray down, she noticed a faint ticking sound coming from beneath one of the tables in the corner area near the bar. She walked over to it and noticed a backpack on the floor, Holding it up, she asked around if it belonged to anyone. Nobody acknowledged the bag was theirs and she decided to open it up to take a look at the contents inside. Setting the bag on the table, she ped it and a mass of wires greeted her sight. A timer was slowly counting down at the very bottom, its red led lights shining from within the darkness of the bag. Taeyeon took a look at the crowd inside the cafe and slowly picked the bag up heading outside the cafe. Sunny noticed the grim expression on Taeyeon and hurriedly followed her out.

Once they were outside, Taeyeon ran as fast as she could down the slope in which their cafe was housed on with Sunny following close behind. Sunny sped up and caught up with Taeyeon trying to find out what has happened. Holding Taeyeon's arm Sunny got dragged along by Taeyeon hearing only a shocking word. "Bomb" Taeyeon finally reached the river at the bottom of the hill and flung the bag as hard as she could. Taeyeon held on to Sunny with her other arm and drew her into her embrace as the bag exploded in mid air. The shrapnels rained down hard on the two of them as Taeyeon held on tightly to Sunny shielding her from most of the impact.

Sunny could feel her ears ringing from the impact of the blast and felt the grip on her back slowly released. Sunny slowly opened her eyes and glanced into the eyes of Taeyeon who looked at her with a pained expression on her face. Before Sunny could open to ask if Taeyeon was ok, she saw Taeyeon's eyes rolled back as she slowly slumped to the ground. It was then Sunny realised her palm which had been hugging Taeyeon just now was covered with her blood. Opening , Sunny could only scream.

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Taeyeon slowly opened her eyes and the white ceiling of the hospital greeted her. She felt a presence near where her left arm was and turned her head to look. She saw the crown of Sunny's head beside her arm and she reached out a hand to ease the frown that was creasing Sunny's brows. She saw the tubes that were plugged into her arms and felt a sharp pain on her back causing her to wince from the action. Sunny woke up immediately when she felt movement coming from the bed and raised her head sharply knocking into Taeyeon's outstretched arm. Taeyeon winced from the pain that shot down her arms and back and quickly replaced it with a smile as she didn't want Sunny to worry. Clenching on the bedsheet, Taeyeon quickly willed the pain away as the smile remained etched on her face as she stared into the concerned face of Sunny.

Taeyeon moved her hand onto Sunny's face and gently brushed the tears that was straining to come out and smiled warmly at her girlfriend. "Baby, you know I hate to see you cry right?" Sunny sniffed hard to control her tears as she turned to kiss the hand that was carressing her face. "Don't you ever do such a thing to me again. When I saw you slumping to the ground in front of me, my heart literally shattered as the thought of losing you flooded through me and made me unable to even breath. Taeyeon, I don't just love you, I need you. You ARE a part of me you know. So DON'T ever leave me like this again. It hurts so much to see you like this even though I knew you will be ok." Taeyeon pulled Sunny into her embrace and even though the pain radiated down her spine from the impact, it didn't matter to Taeyeon anymore as all she wanted to do now was to kiss the girl in front of her and tell her how glad she was to have her in her life. .

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colleenorcullo
#1
Chapter 55: SooNa is so sweet T~T
Taengoo311
#2
Chapter 68: Umm why no updates? D:
SunnyandTae
#3
Chapter 32: New reader. Love where it's going. I'm up to the Christmas special and love it. It's written so well. I can't wait to finish :)
badtestament #4
Wuuthraad : Hahaha, well. Not everything will go to their food binges. I will have a part 3 to explain what they did with the money
badtestament #5
Forever9 : Haha, *evil gleams somemore* Maybe I should tell Youngie about your suspicious love for rilakuma.. *rubs hands in glee* YAH dongsaeng, wae you no update childcare chaos... *prepares the darts you loaned me*
Wuuthraad
#6
I now feel bad for Kim Tae Woo, now that he's going to jail and all his cash is going to fund SooNa food binges XD
badtestament #7
Vedasone : Thanks for the comments. =) Really thanks.

Mashipao : I will post my reply on your wall ok?? =D Thanks for reading my fanfic and thanks even more for your detailed comments and improvement suggestions
MashiPao
#8
S: LAST COMMENT! I SWEAR! XD
While reading your story, I noticed the pros and cons of your writing. So I want to give you some advice to make your fic better and your writing overall. :P
First of all, you do research on your topics. Which is really good. it's very easy to tell that you did your research on the guns and whatnot. In fact, would you mind helping me with that kind of stuff? LOl The amount of information within your story (and the gun explanations in the sequel) clearly show the amount of research you did. Few authors do this large amount of research so kudos to you!
Next, you have AMAZING vocabulary and details. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. Although, your sentences can get a bit awkward at times, it doesn't hide the fact that your details are amazing. However, I think that all the details you have are like a double-edged sword in a sense. It's really great to read a fic with such amazing detail but sometimes it gets...tedious. Your updates are rather short so all I can see is giant paragraph after paragraph. And honestly, it makes me feel like I'm reading an essay instead of a story. So I would recommend maybe taking your giant paragraphs and separating them into smaller ones. That way, it's much easier to read. Not a lot of people want to read giant blocks of text.
Also, your details and whatnot overpower your dialogue. You have more details than you have dialogue. In my opinion, dialogue is what makes a story and fleshes out the characters' personalities. So perhaps add more dialogue into your story?
You have problems writing dialogue as well which is awfully strange because I see you doing it the right way and then you mostly do it the wrong way...such as in Chapter 47. You squish all of your dialogue into one paragraph which is incorrect. (And it causes many readers to run away LOL) There must be a new paragraph every time a new person speaks.
So I'm done. Whew that took a long time to type up. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed and found my comments useful~
MashiPao
#9
Moving on to the next comment! LOL I don't know...I might hit a new high and have to write three comments. I still have much to say. :P Just a heads up, I read teh sequel too so I'll be squishing everything in the comments here. XD
Anyway, continuing about Tiffany. Thumbs up for continuity. I noticed you still had pink dossiers in your sequel. Hehe sorry I just like it when the author stays consistent. I always have smile on my face every time Tiffany enters the cafe: walks/runs in like a boss then glomps everyone. XD (Also yay for slight Taenyish moment in the sequel haha).
Moving on to the highlight of the story that I found the most amusing: Jessica's and Taeyeon's test to get into Department X. Haha it was great. Cucumbers and roasted cockroaches? Wow. Must've been hell. The examiners weren't very smart when they decided not to tie up Jessica's feet. XD Aso I love the background of the Cafe with No Name. I LOL'd at such the lame name and LOL'd even harder when you said "Taeyeon's creativeness". Nice Touch. :)
Moving on the main plot of the story, I must say the Department X definitely have their feet stuck in a pile of crap. Especially Sooyoung. D: It was so sad when she left. Also, I was so surprised at the end when Seohyun drugged Hyoyeon. Why SEOHYUN? WHY? T_T Honestly, I never expected Seohyun of all people. She's too nice and stuff. But you know, the nicest people are probably the most evil and sinister (Does that make me evil? LOL). Going into the sequel, I wonder if Sunny and Hyomin will really fall in love with each other especially since Hyomin is taking such good care of Sunny in the hospital...while Sunny's lover is sulking around, seeking Tiffany for refuge...Shame, Taeyeon. If Sunny caught you, she might have to request you to get into bed immediately. XD Hehe I'm an avid Taeny fan so I'm content with the Taeny development. :P But anyway, Seohyun, why are you so EVIL?! T_T Evil! D: Augghhh...Well, I'm running out of space again. LOL