Special Chapter

Department X

Hi guys, Department X has succesfully reached chapter 15. To thanks you for your support. ME, the author has specially visited the characters at the cafe. Enjoy =)

Author : Thanks for taking the time off to attent this little interview of mine. So lets start with you guys telling me what you think of your characters

Taeyeon : I like my character. I am the leader as usual mwahahaha. Plus I like it that you make me look clever in this fic

Jessica : Why am I always the one that works my off for love. *Looks at Yuri and pouts* I want to to be top the next time*

Yuri : *flips her hair* I am just too pretty to be at the bottom. Did you see the descriptions the author used to described me. Simply just too perfect. Oh but why are they all spies and I am not. Plus, why are my scenes so little. *glowers at author*

Seohyun and Hyoyeon : We want to be spies too. *Brings author to the corner and stuff to her an envelope full of cash* You could say that we are actually some sort of a spy trainee in dept x or something right

Author : Er hmm (Stuffs envelope into pocket) let me think about it. So... *gulps as an angry aura radiates from Sooyoung and Yoona*

Sooyoung : Why am I like the useless one here. All you make me do is eat  *Stuffs patbingsoo into mouth to cool herself down*

Yoona : At least you are not dying and your mentality is higher than mine. I am only 5 in this fic. *glares at author somemore*

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Author : *Gulps* Er ok.., next question. So what do you guys think of the pairing?

Jessica : I am always paired with Yuri. Why can't I be paired with a tall and manly looking guy like Daniel Henny? ^Turns to look at Yuri who's glaring at her* Haha, don't worry baby, you are still my number 1. Who else can be hotter than my baby with her chocolate abs and that y mole she has above her belly button.*Grins ertly at Yuri*  I will be right back *Drags her to the toilet*

Yoona : I am ok with it so far. Its rare that I get to pair up with Youngie over here but I am having fun so far.. But its not fair that she doesn't put on any weight but I gained 3kgs after 15 chapters. Plus I am dying. How great is that. *Glares at author somemore*

Sooyoung : You better not let my Yoong die or I will make sure I go to your house and clean your cupboards and refrigerator.

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Author : Er this question goes to Yuri. *Looks around for Yuri* Has anyone seen Yuri anywhere?

Taeyeon : I believe she is currently "unavailable". Sighs and leans on Sunny, now I will have to clean the toilet again. ARGH!! "Yoona, Sooyoung. Buy me loads of cucumber tomorrow."

Sooyoung and Yoona : *stands up and salutes Taeyeon* Aye aye captain.

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Author : Ok last question. So what do you like and dislike about this fanfic.

Tiffany : I LOVE MY CAR!! I dislike the fact that Tae Tae isn't mine this time. *Smiles seductively at Taeyeon*

Sunny : I love the fact that I finally get to kick some in this fic. Its usually Yuri or Jessica's turn. *Glares at author somemore* But I hate it when you make me seduce that guard. Do you know how digusting he is, His beard was like so thick and bushy and he sweats and smells and ugh.. turns green as she hides in Taeyeon arms and makes vomitting sound.

Sooyoung: The food part is nice especially the ice cream buffet part

Yoona butts in : BUT I AM STILL DYING. Yah, I have already been suffering for past 2 chapters. When are you going to make me recover already. Do you know how hard it is to have to eat through the tube in your nose? *Trys to stuff a straw up the author's nose to give her a feel*

Author : *Runs away screaming* Thanks for the interview!!!!!!

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colleenorcullo #1
Chapter 55: SooNa is so sweet T~T
Taengoo311 #2
Chapter 68: Umm why no updates? D:
SunnyandTae #3
Chapter 32: New reader. Love where it's going. I'm up to the Christmas special and love it. It's written so well. I can't wait to finish :)
badtestament #4
Wuuthraad : Hahaha, well. Not everything will go to their food binges. I will have a part 3 to explain what they did with the money
badtestament #5
Forever9 : Haha, *evil gleams somemore* Maybe I should tell Youngie about your suspicious love for rilakuma.. *rubs hands in glee* YAH dongsaeng, wae you no update childcare chaos... *prepares the darts you loaned me*
Wuuthraad #6
I now feel bad for Kim Tae Woo, now that he's going to jail and all his cash is going to fund SooNa food binges XD
badtestament #7
Vedasone : Thanks for the comments. =) Really thanks.

Mashipao : I will post my reply on your wall ok?? =D Thanks for reading my fanfic and thanks even more for your detailed comments and improvement suggestions
MashiPao #8
S: LAST COMMENT! I SWEAR! XD
While reading your story, I noticed the pros and cons of your writing. So I want to give you some advice to make your fic better and your writing overall. :P
First of all, you do research on your topics. Which is really good. it's very easy to tell that you did your research on the guns and whatnot. In fact, would you mind helping me with that kind of stuff? LOl The amount of information within your story (and the gun explanations in the sequel) clearly show the amount of research you did. Few authors do this large amount of research so kudos to you!
Next, you have AMAZING vocabulary and details. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. Although, your sentences can get a bit awkward at times, it doesn't hide the fact that your details are amazing. However, I think that all the details you have are like a double-edged sword in a sense. It's really great to read a fic with such amazing detail but sometimes it gets...tedious. Your updates are rather short so all I can see is giant paragraph after paragraph. And honestly, it makes me feel like I'm reading an essay instead of a story. So I would recommend maybe taking your giant paragraphs and separating them into smaller ones. That way, it's much easier to read. Not a lot of people want to read giant blocks of text.
Also, your details and whatnot overpower your dialogue. You have more details than you have dialogue. In my opinion, dialogue is what makes a story and fleshes out the characters' personalities. So perhaps add more dialogue into your story?
You have problems writing dialogue as well which is awfully strange because I see you doing it the right way and then you mostly do it the wrong way...such as in Chapter 47. You squish all of your dialogue into one paragraph which is incorrect. (And it causes many readers to run away LOL) There must be a new paragraph every time a new person speaks.
So I'm done. Whew that took a long time to type up. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed and found my comments useful~
MashiPao #9
Moving on to the next comment! LOL I don't know...I might hit a new high and have to write three comments. I still have much to say. :P Just a heads up, I read teh sequel too so I'll be squishing everything in the comments here. XD
Anyway, continuing about Tiffany. Thumbs up for continuity. I noticed you still had pink dossiers in your sequel. Hehe sorry I just like it when the author stays consistent. I always have smile on my face every time Tiffany enters the cafe: walks/runs in like a boss then glomps everyone. XD (Also yay for slight Taenyish moment in the sequel haha).
Moving on to the highlight of the story that I found the most amusing: Jessica's and Taeyeon's test to get into Department X. Haha it was great. Cucumbers and roasted cockroaches? Wow. Must've been hell. The examiners weren't very smart when they decided not to tie up Jessica's feet. XD Aso I love the background of the Cafe with No Name. I LOL'd at such the lame name and LOL'd even harder when you said "Taeyeon's creativeness". Nice Touch. :)
Moving on the main plot of the story, I must say the Department X definitely have their feet stuck in a pile of crap. Especially Sooyoung. D: It was so sad when she left. Also, I was so surprised at the end when Seohyun drugged Hyoyeon. Why SEOHYUN? WHY? T_T Honestly, I never expected Seohyun of all people. She's too nice and stuff. But you know, the nicest people are probably the most evil and sinister (Does that make me evil? LOL). Going into the sequel, I wonder if Sunny and Hyomin will really fall in love with each other especially since Hyomin is taking such good care of Sunny in the hospital...while Sunny's lover is sulking around, seeking Tiffany for refuge...Shame, Taeyeon. If Sunny caught you, she might have to request you to get into bed immediately. XD Hehe I'm an avid Taeny fan so I'm content with the Taeny development. :P But anyway, Seohyun, why are you so EVIL?! T_T Evil! D: Augghhh...Well, I'm running out of space again. LOL
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