Chapter 36

Department X

Yuri held the printout in her trembling hands as she confirmed and reconfirmed a billion times hoping and praying that somehow the face in the printout will turn out to be wrong and its actually someone elses face that got printed out. She got more and more desperate with each check as the guards bombarded her to make a decision about dealing with the intruder before she takes actions. Forcing herself to make the decision, Yuri ordered the guards to stand down as she was afraid of them hurting Jessica. It was time for them to talk.

Yuri trained one of the surveillance camera onto the spot where Jessica was hiding and at face that appeared on the screen lovingly. A single drop of tear rolled her cheek as she brushed it away with the back of her arm. Yuri thought back to their first meeting at the roadside stall. She was there to discuss business when the goons entered. Not wanting to create attention, she had chose to sit there quietly and watch as Jessica kicked their . How could she have been so dumb to miss out the fact that has been right smacked in her face from the start. How could a simple barista have such good skills. Her moves had hinted of military combat skills and that flexibility she showed in bed, no simple barista could have achieved that without years and years of training. Yuri shooked her head as a phrase she learnt in school came to her mind. Love is blind and it seems in her case, love had really blinded her right from the start. Yuri gave the monitor image of Jessica a last gentle carress as she headed to her dad's room to explain the situation to him.

Yuri briefly explained her relationship with Jessica to her dad who didn't seem surprised at all. When she finally ended her speech, Andy smiled as he scruffled her hair "My dear, you seemed to have forgotten who is the owner of that club you kissed her in, the museum that you hung up a painting of her and the hotel in which the two of you slept in. I may be old, but I am still glad for you that you have found somebody that could make you smile from the bottom of your heart. She was also the main reason why I decided to get a new identity for the both of us. I didn't want you to have to face telling her about what you did for a living, but I guess... I was too late. I am sorry for everything" Yuri's front shattered in front of her dad as she collasped in his arms and cried her heart out. Andy embraced his daugther as he reassured her that everything will be alright in the end. He would make sure of it. When the sobs had finally subsided, Yuri calmed herself down as she made the hardest decision of her life. She was choosing her dad's safety over her love for Jessica. Yuri made arrangement for the deportation of her dad and all the guards in the villa and when everything was done, the night had fallen and it was time for the confrontation to start.

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Nightfall came as Jessica sprang into action. She took the Ruger out from its holster and entered into the vicinity. Surprised that there was completely no resistance, Jessica wondered where all the guards had gone to as she silently entered the mansion from a side door that was carelessly left unlocked. Taking the utmost care not to be seen or heard, Reporting back to Taeyeon, Jessica proceeded towards a light source that shone from one of the rooms upstairs. Creeping up the stairs, she carefully stepped on the side panels ensuring that no creaks were heard. When she finally reached the room, she pushed open the door gently revealing a study room with a desk in the middle of the room. The room was dark as the only light source came from the litte table lamp that litted up a circle of 60cm in diameter. The rest of the room was shrouded in darkness as Jessica slowly entered the room pricking her ears up to catch any sound of feets approaching in her direction. She headed towards the desk to check out the contents and the instant her back turned, she felt the metal barrel of a pistol pointed at the back of head and a voice which she found to be extremely familiar came from behind her telling her to drop her gun slowly.

Jessica knew when she was defeated and that she had no choice but to abide with it. Lowering her gun onto the floor, she noticed that the voice was quivering. Jessic heard the sharp intake of a breath through the nose as a pair of arms wrapped themselves around her and the gun dropped from it landing in front of Jessica. Tears wet the fabric around her shoulder as the reality hit Jessica in a shot, She knew the embrace very well. It was an embrace she enjoyed experiencing, an embrace that would warm her in the darkest and coldest nights. But this time, the weight of the embrace made her felt like her heart got crushed in an instant as it was forcibly ripped out from inside of her and thrown into the void because she now knew who the embracer was. It was the one she loved even more than herself. The one whom she was going to get married to. The love of her life...Kwon Yuri.

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colleenorcullo
#1
Chapter 55: SooNa is so sweet T~T
Taengoo311
#2
Chapter 68: Umm why no updates? D:
SunnyandTae
#3
Chapter 32: New reader. Love where it's going. I'm up to the Christmas special and love it. It's written so well. I can't wait to finish :)
badtestament #4
Wuuthraad : Hahaha, well. Not everything will go to their food binges. I will have a part 3 to explain what they did with the money
badtestament #5
Forever9 : Haha, *evil gleams somemore* Maybe I should tell Youngie about your suspicious love for rilakuma.. *rubs hands in glee* YAH dongsaeng, wae you no update childcare chaos... *prepares the darts you loaned me*
Wuuthraad
#6
I now feel bad for Kim Tae Woo, now that he's going to jail and all his cash is going to fund SooNa food binges XD
badtestament #7
Vedasone : Thanks for the comments. =) Really thanks.

Mashipao : I will post my reply on your wall ok?? =D Thanks for reading my fanfic and thanks even more for your detailed comments and improvement suggestions
MashiPao
#8
S: LAST COMMENT! I SWEAR! XD
While reading your story, I noticed the pros and cons of your writing. So I want to give you some advice to make your fic better and your writing overall. :P
First of all, you do research on your topics. Which is really good. it's very easy to tell that you did your research on the guns and whatnot. In fact, would you mind helping me with that kind of stuff? LOl The amount of information within your story (and the gun explanations in the sequel) clearly show the amount of research you did. Few authors do this large amount of research so kudos to you!
Next, you have AMAZING vocabulary and details. ABSOLUTELY AMAZING. Although, your sentences can get a bit awkward at times, it doesn't hide the fact that your details are amazing. However, I think that all the details you have are like a double-edged sword in a sense. It's really great to read a fic with such amazing detail but sometimes it gets...tedious. Your updates are rather short so all I can see is giant paragraph after paragraph. And honestly, it makes me feel like I'm reading an essay instead of a story. So I would recommend maybe taking your giant paragraphs and separating them into smaller ones. That way, it's much easier to read. Not a lot of people want to read giant blocks of text.
Also, your details and whatnot overpower your dialogue. You have more details than you have dialogue. In my opinion, dialogue is what makes a story and fleshes out the characters' personalities. So perhaps add more dialogue into your story?
You have problems writing dialogue as well which is awfully strange because I see you doing it the right way and then you mostly do it the wrong way...such as in Chapter 47. You squish all of your dialogue into one paragraph which is incorrect. (And it causes many readers to run away LOL) There must be a new paragraph every time a new person speaks.
So I'm done. Whew that took a long time to type up. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed and found my comments useful~
MashiPao
#9
Moving on to the next comment! LOL I don't know...I might hit a new high and have to write three comments. I still have much to say. :P Just a heads up, I read teh sequel too so I'll be squishing everything in the comments here. XD
Anyway, continuing about Tiffany. Thumbs up for continuity. I noticed you still had pink dossiers in your sequel. Hehe sorry I just like it when the author stays consistent. I always have smile on my face every time Tiffany enters the cafe: walks/runs in like a boss then glomps everyone. XD (Also yay for slight Taenyish moment in the sequel haha).
Moving on to the highlight of the story that I found the most amusing: Jessica's and Taeyeon's test to get into Department X. Haha it was great. Cucumbers and roasted cockroaches? Wow. Must've been hell. The examiners weren't very smart when they decided not to tie up Jessica's feet. XD Aso I love the background of the Cafe with No Name. I LOL'd at such the lame name and LOL'd even harder when you said "Taeyeon's creativeness". Nice Touch. :)
Moving on the main plot of the story, I must say the Department X definitely have their feet stuck in a pile of crap. Especially Sooyoung. D: It was so sad when she left. Also, I was so surprised at the end when Seohyun drugged Hyoyeon. Why SEOHYUN? WHY? T_T Honestly, I never expected Seohyun of all people. She's too nice and stuff. But you know, the nicest people are probably the most evil and sinister (Does that make me evil? LOL). Going into the sequel, I wonder if Sunny and Hyomin will really fall in love with each other especially since Hyomin is taking such good care of Sunny in the hospital...while Sunny's lover is sulking around, seeking Tiffany for refuge...Shame, Taeyeon. If Sunny caught you, she might have to request you to get into bed immediately. XD Hehe I'm an avid Taeny fan so I'm content with the Taeny development. :P But anyway, Seohyun, why are you so EVIL?! T_T Evil! D: Augghhh...Well, I'm running out of space again. LOL