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♥ TITLE 3/5: It's a simple tittle. Nice but not catchy and it's seriously cliché and lame but not everyone has the talent to create wonderful tittles, right? And I think SM's Project is better.

♥ FOREWORD + DESCRIPTION 8/10: Okay, I like your description. You don't have anything to show in the foreword but your description is more than enough. Yes, it's really good enough to make readers feel curious about your story especially with that last lines, 'what it's like to be and bullied.' Here's some grammar mistakes in your description.
Original: "Kim Min Ryu is SM's star trainee. However, he is too young to debut on his own without to deal with far too much stress and pressure, so they decide to introduce him as EXO's 13th member for a while, so as to let him adjust. They call this project, Project SM."
Suggested: "Kim Min Ryu is SM's star trainee. However, he is too young to debut on his own without dealing with his far too much stress and pressure. So SM decided to introduce him as EXO's 13th member for a while, so Min Ryu will be able to adjust himself in his new life as an idol. This project is called, Project SM."
Note: You don't have to squeeze all words into one sentence. And you'll have to know that 'so as to let him adjust' is sincerely not suitable in that sentence.

♥ STYLE + DESIGN 3/5: Everything is normal. But It's better if you justify it so that it won't look that messy and a bit neat.

♥ PLOT 25/30: Good and almost original plots developed and elaborated by you. I think it's alright and you may resume your good work.

♥ CHARACTERIZATION 10/15: You described Min Ryu very well. But what happened to Sang Hyun after they got separated in different groups? And, I don't know why but.. It bothers me when each member of EXO are being too kind to him.

♥ GRAMMAR + SPELLING 12/20: Now, I think we should get down real business. Your spelling is almost perfect so I'll skip that part. Here's some grammar mistakes that I've noticed.
Original: "I got into SM about 10 to 11 months ago, right before my 15th birthday, so I was 15 when I entered SM."
Suggested: "I got into SM about 10 or 11 months ago, right before my 15th birthday, so I was 14 when I entered SM."
Note: No, dear. He's actually 14 when he entered SM because you wrote 'before his 15th birthday' which indicates that he's not yet completely 15.
Original: "I bruise easily, but I can hide it up just as easily."
Suggested: "I got bruises easily, but I can hide them with some BB cream."
Note: And I also suggest you throw away that BB cream things you wrote after the sentences mentioned up there.
+I mentioned two mistakes only as there's a lot of grammar mistakes in your story. You should re-read and edit them by yourself, not only you will learn your mistakes but you will be able to create even more good sentences later.

♥ FLOW 7/10: I think you did well with the story's flow. I like it.It's not too fast or too slow so good job! Keep up with this good work!

♥ OVERALL ENJOYMENT 5/5: I love this story! Otherwise I won't give you full marks, upvoted and subscribed to your story, right? This story is awesome. I love this story!

♥ OVERALL SCORE 73/100 

a/n: Wow! That's not a bad score, isn't it? Well, I suggest you to make maybe one of EXO's member to become like a bit cold, hesitates a lot and doesn't like new people like Min Ryu but pretend that he do. Maybe Kris, Kai or Sehun? This will make your story more dramatic. It doesn't have to end with sad ending, but you can make that EXO's member suddenly like Min Ryu at the end, and it would be a happy ending. This is just a suggestion, though. Request from us more at the future, okay? We will be anticipating your request! Thanks for requesting!

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