View days ago, I asked my friend, Deedee, to review this fic. And since we're friend so I asked her to be frankly when she reviews my fic.

So, this is the result of her review.

Please Say No to Him Coz I Still Love You

by alize_sakura

Story title: 8/10

Comment: From the title itself, users can see that the story is about a couple who used to be together but is now separated. It's kind of predictable, to be honest.

Description/Foreword: 19/20

Comment: The description really does its purpose - it tells readers what they will expect of the story. It gives us the summary without really giving a spoiler away.

Grammar/spelling: 7/10

Comment: There are quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes that I've found along the way as I read. One example from chapter 1: "I smiled and nodded. SeungHo was always good to me. But so did DooJoon…" It should be: "I smiled and nodded. SeungHo was always good to me. But so was DooJoon…"

Plot: 18/20

Comment: There are actually a bunch of stories like this where there are two guys who like the same girl and she has to choose between them. But you made it in your way that readers wouldn't get bored. Although, I did think that some parts were a bit draggy.

Entertainment: 18/20

Comment: See comments above.

Writing Style: 19/20

Comment: What I liked about your writing style in this story is that you stuck to one POV in a chapter. And you didn't really tell readers whose POV it is; we just had to guess which made it interesting.

Total score: 89/100

Reviews credit to : deedee48

Thank you, Dee, for the review. Let's do collaboration again sometimes and messed up with purely crack fic~ XDDD

So, what do you think??