Gehenna
Requested by: dhaatk
Reviewer: Yoon_Jeonghan
Review Requested: August 8th, 2015
Review Completed & Posted: August 10th, 2015
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Title (10/10)
A very creative title. I haven't seen any fanfic with the same title and I didn't even know the word existed until this story. 

Foreword (13/15)
No layout was used, but a layout is not required for a good story. The display of pictures seem to fit well with the description, creating a haunting yet sweet impression. The summary, however simple, gets straight to the point and introduces the characters briefly. The small snippets of scenes gives an overview about what happens in the story which was very clever of the author as it really catches the audience's attention with the way the author has described the scenes.

Characters (17/20)
I love the characters, especially Jaejoong. He's so demanding, cold, cocky yet absolutely stunning, sweet and adorable at the same time, I love him and how the character has described him. As of now, I haven't been really fond of Yunho even though he is the main character, but that's just how my brain works. I really like the back story the author has provided for Yunho and how the author has described him as a strong being who is able to overcome hardships. Very good character development, although sort of lacking in the character introduction. 

Narative Elements (26/30)
A very interesting plot line, although sounds a bit cliche, the author makes up for it with wonderful descriptions of the characters and scenes. The narration is consistent and there are a few minor mistakes here and there. Sometimes the sentences don't really flow, but with the creative descriptions of the scenes, it can be overlooked.

Plot and Theme (31/35)
Even though the story has not been finished, I really like it so far. The characters are really interesting and the plot, although a bit cliche, the author makes up for it with the descriptions. I really enjoy the the pictures/GIFs at the beggining of each chapter as it really hits deep and has you thinking about what is going to happen. It leaves a gloomy and mysterious impression that leaves you wanting to dig further into the story. However, I do believe that the relationship between Yunho and Jaejoong progresses really fast, but it doesn't really affect the flow of the story.

Entertainment Factors (9/10)
I love the story so far and will continue to read it on my other account (Piercee). It's a dark yet sweet fanfic and I really recommend it to the audience if you enjoy those weird awkward relationships. This is also the first story I have ever given a score higher than 100, congratulations!! 
PS. I really like this story because of the Jaejoong GIFs. He's so hot!

Overall Score (106/120) *This story has been added to the Hall of Fame*

REVIEWER'S NOTE:
I loved the oneshot, it's a must read. Great character descriptions, development and the characters are hot and have weird personalities. I really recommend it and shall continue reading and waiting for the next update of the story. Congratulations on receiving a score higher than 100.

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