Nothing Lust Forever 
Requested By: Alecchi
Reviewer: -theunniefangirl
Review Requested: July 16th, 2015
Review Completed & Posted: July 24th, 2015
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Sorry for the constant wait since I have to share this with my of a brother and every time he sees this page, half done and not yet saved, he closes the tab as if on purpose. I've spending the past days trying to get this done, but my brother just loves to see me suffer.

Title (5/10)
It's seems that it's just me who thinks this, but I can't take this title seriously. I can see how it relates to the story and all and how it mixes in with the story. It's pretty clever, but it feels more like something you'd find on a ty romantic comedy. IDK it's just that it seems too cheesy for an angst story. It honestly kind of turned me off when I first read the application. Honestly, A Diary of a Submissive seems better, but hell it';s just me who dislikes it so you have no need to.

Foreword (15/15)
I'm just going to come up and say that your foreward was y as hell. Lol, I guess this is technically a bad thing, but it encourages me to read on when I see pretty layouts. Your description was fine and you revealed enough of the story for it to be intriguing. 

Characters (19.5/20)
Your characters were really realistic (say that fast 10 times lol). I really like how Hyeri fits into the role of a submissive, but still knows how to stand up for herself. She was able to fight against Yura when she felt what she was doing was wrong. She was at first fighting against Yura in the first chapter, feeling as though it was all weird, but then fell under Yura's control and became a sub to her dom.

 Yura was definitely a mysterious character. We honestly really didn't know what went on through her head most of the time. She's honestly a very complex character and I like that. I really love how she changest her mood and personality when she's at work vs when she is with Hyeri. She can be a bit heartless to Hyeri, but she at times shows she is human. I really loved Yura.

 Also you get an additional .5 points for making it about YuHye.

Narrative Elements (30/30)
Your writing is amazing. I was able to feel what Hyeri felt (well not really, but you know what I mean), and felt like I was in the story.

 I have absolutely nothing to complain about here. Your perspective was fine, I saw no errors in the story. I really liked that.

Plot and Theme (30/35)
This isn't the most unique plot out here. are a really common thing in fanfiction *cough*50 Shades of Grey*cough*, but don't worry I won't compare your story to that confusing mess.

 You did add a lot of twists and turns to the story, which may seem uneeded in some stories, but in here they fit right through.

Entertainment Factors (10/10)
I really enjoyed this story, mainly because of YuHye. I don't know, I just ship them so hard. Am I the only fangirl out here who prefers girlxgirl rather than boyxboy? *gets shot in the head by delusional fangirl*. Your descriptions and everything made this a fun and intresting read. I will personally try to keep up with your other work ^^

Overall Score (109.5/120) *This review has been added to The Hall of Fame*

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