Lost And Found
Review Requested By: Ilikebeinme2411
Reviewer: scookieez
Review Requested: August 3rd, 2015
Review Completed & Posted: August 9th, 2015
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Title (5/10)
It’s pretty cliché but it makes readers more interested. The story doesn’t have many chapters yet so I can’t tell whether it’s linked to the story or not.

Foreword (9/15)
I think the foreword is interesting and captures the reader’s attention and makes them curious. There were some grammatical mistakes that you may want to double check. It was pretty simple as well.

Characters (7/20)
The story hasn’t developed properly yet so the characters aren’t exactly known and they’re quite confusing as of now. Only one character has properly been introduced and we still know nothing of her yet however this also makes the reader curious.

Narrative Elements (20/30)
You’ve stuck to the same narration which is good but there are grammatical errors.

Plot & Theme (14/35)
Not much has happened to say but so far I’ve not read a story like this before.

Entertainment Factors (7/10)
It’s quite intriguing and it makes the reader want to read on to see what’s actually happening which Is good. I think you should come back when the story is completed, I think you’d get a better review! It’s interesting but there’s not much to review.

Overall Score (62/120)

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