Laws of Motion & Attraction
Requested by: KayeAllen12
Reviewer: Yoon_Jeonghan
Review Requested: July 23rd, 2015
Review Completed & Posted: July 25th, 2015
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Title: (9/10)
The title was really creative, very quirky and cute. It actually relates to the story and it was really clever of the author to relate it to one of the character's occupation. I really like it as the title sounds nerdy yet cute, which is exactly what the story is.

Foreword: (9/15)
No layout was used, but a layout is not required for a good story. The quote in the description was a really smart use, it had me thinking about the conflict in the story, if it was related to the quote or not. The summary, like the title was nerdy, which makes the story really stand out.

Characters: (16/20)
I really love all the characters the author has introduced so far. Although, the author did not specify what their personalities were, I learnt through the dialogue that the characters were very funny and sarcastic, which really lightens the mood of the story. I love all the interactions between the main character and V, and I find it adorable that despite being her teacher, he is still able to act cutesy towards her. And Jungkook, just when things were getting in the relationship between V and the main character, he decides to come in and kill the mood!

Narative Elements: (26/30)
Third person was consistently used throughout the chapters. The delivery was great and the setting, although not really described, the readers can picture what kind of scenery and time period it is through the small light descriptions that the author adds in her chapters. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but it's not a major problem. The big problem is, after the first chapter, the rest of the chapters became really cluttered and overwhelming. The text was all over the place. I really suggest the author uses proper paragraphs to even out her chapters. Other than that, everything was well written.

Plot and Theme: (29/35)
I really like the plot, although cliche, the descriptions and dialogue makes the story nerdy and quirky, which makes the story really engaging. The story is light yet at the same time so dramatic with the appearance of Jungkook. My favourite parts were the kiss scenes because you can feel all the emotions that the characters have pent up poured into one kiss. A teacher and student relationship was used as a theme which is overly used on the site, but I believe the author has other plans to make this story unique in its own way.

Entertainment Factors: (8/10)
I loved all the dialogue and descriptions. It was quirky, light and very nerdy with all the science-y stuff at the beginning of the chapters. It was very enjoyable, and I love every chapter so far. It's dramatic and bittersweet yet at the same time heart-warming. The development of the relationship between the main character and V is very cute.

Overall Score: (97/120)

REVIEWER'S NOTE:
Overall, I believe the author should continue doing what she does with the plot. Just maybe change the layout of her chaqpters as the words seem very cluttered and unorganised. I love the story, the characters and the development and really hope to continue reading. Thank you for requesting and sorry for the late review.

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