☂ A Piece of Me for You to Keep

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-This week's recommended story-

 

 

Title: A Piece of Me for You to Keep

Author: serendipity--

Pairings: Jongin + Kyungsoo (Kaisoo)

Type: Angst

Length: One-shot

 

Description (By Author):

Exhibit the dandelion effect.
 

 
My Comment:
 
Forget all about chanbaek's 'Forevermore' from serendipityy-- because you'll completely remember why you fall in love with
'Forevermore' again with 'A Piece of Me for You to Keep'. Be prepared to be fully immersed in a story of faith, hope and a little sense of a idol reality. 
 
Even though I love and love the storyline which is simple but beautiful and extrememly moving, the author's writing style is the one that makes it so hard for the story to leave me alone. It's so hauntingly alluring and realistic sentences in the story forces me to pause at every single sentence so I can fully grasp the whole meaning of it. 
 
Definitely a good read and it's almost impossible for it to be done in one-shot but it's in fact a one-shot so do enjoy and shower the story with love! And I STILL can't get over about the dandelions part, totally nailed it.
 
(I thought the later idea of describing Kyungsoo as a dandelion was pure genius because it doesn't feel forced or any of that sort. -from review)
 
 
sir dandelion, full bloom
 
The younger makes him want things that he can’t have, and that’s why he’s so dangerous.

 

 

// A Piece of Me for You to Keep //

 

This recommendation is written by pilsuk123

This story is reviewed by pilsuk123 (90%)

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GikHan
#1
Chapter 211: i hope u dont deactivate the acc yet as i want to read it as a learning for me thanks :)
-TUANA-
#2
Panda-Chu
#3
I don't suppose you guys will be open again soon? //bricked
marzorie25
#4
Chapter 282: thank you for the review! <3
Sweetmusic6
#5
I sent the application form~^^
Sweetmusic6
#6
Hi~^^ I'd like to apply to be a reviewer. If you have any questions please contact me on my profile or PM me~^^ thanks
reikundesho #7
Title: Of Fingers and Lullabies
Story's link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/693815/of-fingers-and-lullabies-angst-fluff-romance-exo-chanbaek
Length: Prologue/3
Password: Yehet
Preferred Reviewer: pilsuk
Themes: angst, tragedy, slightly romcom
Graded review: Yes
Additional Comments: I enjoyed and appreciated the last review pilsuk provided me the last time, which was for my fic Awake My Soul. I would like to thank you again for that! It totally helped me into correcting the mistakes you acknowledged. Anyway, I would be more than privileged if you reviewed my this Chanbaek piece. I posted this almost a year ago btw :) I don't really mind if it will take time. I completely understand. Thanks again!
sevenpixels #8
Chapter 278: Oh my, thank you so so so so so much! I will go improve on my story and hopefully you'll still accept requests!
caleesia #9
Chapter 282: Thank you so much for the lovely review!
Yes, I did look around for graphic shops, but the only two I liked were on hiatus so I decided the poster would just have to wait. And thanks for your positive comments on the description, because that was the part I spent the most time writing and I honestly worried about giving too much away. But there were a lot of things I drew from personal experience, so seeing that you seem to be able to relate to the story and characters really makes me happy as a writer. I would love to request another review later on when I've uploaded more of the cic (when I have time to write more of the fic), but for now I've credited the shop! Thank you!