☂ Essences of the Universe

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Title: Essences of the Universe (Of Dawns and Stars)

Author: RukawaHolmes

Pairings: Layhan + OT12

Type: Angst

Length: One-shot

 

Description (By Author):

This is a story of the universe. This is a story of the universe and the immortal beings who were born when it started. This is a story of their love... 

 
My Comment:
 
I can't even start... THIS STORY! There's actually two different story in chapter 1 and chapter 2 respectively but both are equally breath-taking that I had problem which to feature but I ended up choosing 'Of Dawn and Stars' which is in chapter 1. Even right from the start you can tell that it's a unique and one of a kind of story! I mean the boys are being described as the ones who help the universe. From Yixing dancing to lit up stars, Luhan (Dawn-boy) from painting the sky to Baekhyun as the sun. 
 
I cannot adjust back to reality after reading the story because it was written in such a peculiar (in a good way) writing style and flawlessly delivering the story so damn perfectly. You'll want more after reading it!
 
 
 
 
 
 
He could make a million dawns for man and yet no one would look at the sky and admire it....
That leaves Yixing, the light from the first star to be born.
No one but him knows why the sky looks that pale and sickly. No one but him knows Yixing might be the cause of it.
 

 

This recommendation is written by pilsuk123

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GikHan #1
Chapter 211: i hope u dont deactivate the acc yet as i want to read it as a learning for me thanks :)
-TUANA- #2
afflies? http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1016568
thank you
Panda-Chu #3
I don't suppose you guys will be open again soon? //bricked
marzorie25 #4
Chapter 282: thank you for the review! <3
Sweetmusic6 #5
I sent the application form~^^
Sweetmusic6 #6
Hi~^^ I'd like to apply to be a reviewer. If you have any questions please contact me on my profile or PM me~^^ thanks
reikundesho #7
Title: Of Fingers and Lullabies
Story's link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/693815/of-fingers-and-lullabies-angst-fluff-romance-exo-chanbaek
Length: Prologue/3
Password: Yehet
Preferred Reviewer: pilsuk
Themes: angst, tragedy, slightly romcom
Graded review: Yes
Additional Comments: I enjoyed and appreciated the last review pilsuk provided me the last time, which was for my fic Awake My Soul. I would like to thank you again for that! It totally helped me into correcting the mistakes you acknowledged. Anyway, I would be more than privileged if you reviewed my this Chanbaek piece. I posted this almost a year ago btw :) I don't really mind if it will take time. I completely understand. Thanks again!
sevenpixels #8
Chapter 278: Oh my, thank you so so so so so much! I will go improve on my story and hopefully you'll still accept requests!
caleesia #9
Chapter 282: Thank you so much for the lovely review!
Yes, I did look around for graphic shops, but the only two I liked were on hiatus so I decided the poster would just have to wait. And thanks for your positive comments on the description, because that was the part I spent the most time writing and I honestly worried about giving too much away. But there were a lot of things I drew from personal experience, so seeing that you seem to be able to relate to the story and characters really makes me happy as a writer. I would love to request another review later on when I've uploaded more of the cic (when I have time to write more of the fic), but for now I've credited the shop! Thank you!
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