☂ Wenn Wir Miteinander Tanzen

-This week's recommended story-

Author: Seifenblasenseele

Pairings: Kris + Lay (Kray)

Type: Romance + Feels + Dance + y

Length: One-shot

Description (By Author):

Yifan isn't exactly the most avid party-goer, and he certainly is no fan of Luhan's party fames. But being caught in one together with Yixing might turn out to be the best thing that could have happened to him that night.

My Comment: (from review)

I love your writing style enough. It's easy to enjoy and yet it has it's own beauty in every sentence. I feel like everything that was writtin in the story sounded so magical and also very smartly written.

I loved this one-shot! It's so memorable and romantic in non-cheesy way. I don't know if it's because it's fanxing or because of the writing style or both, it made the story non-cheesy and special. The idea of two person developing feelings for each other with a dance ony either happens in fairy tale or movies but it fels special in this particualr story.

Yifan is unwilling—unable—to open his eyes, to move a single muscle.

It's dark outside, away from the light of the party, but Yifan doesn't need his eyes to recognize Yixing.

He wants the moment, the song to last longer, preferably forever.

// Wenn Wir Miteinander Tanzen //

This recommendation is written by pilsuk123

This story was reviewed and graded 90.5% : link

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GikHan #1 Jan 4, 2017 18:24:00

Chapter 211: i hope u dont deactivate the acc yet as i want to read it as a learning for me thanks :)

-TUANA- #2 Sep 15, 2015 14:13:52

afflies? http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1016568
thank you

Panda-Chu #3 May 29, 2015 15:36:21

I don't suppose you guys will be open again soon? //bricked

marzorie25 #4 May 25, 2015 20:48:14

Chapter 282: thank you for the review! <3

Sweetmusic6 #5 Apr 19, 2015 15:54:06

I sent the application form~^^

Sweetmusic6 #6 Apr 19, 2015 11:53:39

Hi~^^ I'd like to apply to be a reviewer. If you have any questions please contact me on my profile or PM me~^^ thanks

reikundesho #7 Apr 2, 2015 08:12:07

Title: Of Fingers and Lullabies
Story's link: http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/693815/of-fingers-and-lullabies-angst-fluff-romance-exo-chanbaek
Length: Prologue/3
Password: Yehet
Preferred Reviewer: pilsuk
Themes: angst, tragedy, slightly romcom
Graded review: Yes
Additional Comments: I enjoyed and appreciated the last review pilsuk provided me the last time, which was for my fic Awake My Soul. I would like to thank you again for that! It totally helped me into correcting the mistakes you acknowledged. Anyway, I would be more than privileged if you reviewed my this Chanbaek piece. I posted this almost a year ago btw :) I don't really mind if it will take time. I completely understand. Thanks again!

sevenpixels #8 Mar 11, 2015 03:39:10

Chapter 278: Oh my, thank you so so so so so much! I will go improve on my story and hopefully you'll still accept requests!

caleesia #9 Mar 5, 2015 05:53:37

Chapter 282: Thank you so much for the lovely review!
Yes, I did look around for graphic shops, but the only two I liked were on hiatus so I decided the poster would just have to wait. And thanks for your positive comments on the description, because that was the part I spent the most time writing and I honestly worried about giving too much away. But there were a lot of things I drew from personal experience, so seeing that you seem to be able to relate to the story and characters really makes me happy as a writer. I would love to request another review later on when I've uploaded more of the cic (when I have time to write more of the fic), but for now I've credited the shop! Thank you!