Model Students

A Wall In between

Yo!!!!! I finally reached 70 Subbies!! It's a really big achievement for someone as small as me . So I wanna thank every single one of you all including the silent readers. I hope you all enjoyed Hyunsoo's dream. She is a little strange and I'm even stranger for being able to make up such a strange character. Anyways lets celebrate *Celebrate good times come on*. Thanks for supporting me for so long. I love all your feedbacks etc and I'm hoping to see more. It's the only way to know that you guys are alive. Enough of me lets get back to Hyunsoo and Myungsoo :)


 

That day, after school I went to the head teacher to get permission to go and view the place we will be staying at. Myungsoo joined me no matter how hard I tried to convince him not to. I eventually gave up and he got permission to come with me as 'acting vice president' as most schools have such a thing. I told Myungsoo not to be late and before heading home, we went and put some credit onto our travel card. I still had a bad stomach from the sandwich Myungsoo gave me so I went straight to bed when I got home after ironing my uniform and sorting out the money and everything. Since we had to go because of a school issue, we had to wear school uniform. I fell asleep after feeding Eros.
 
I woke up in the morning and followed my normal routine. I sorted my uniform out after putting it on. Making sure top button was done etc. First impressions always count. I checked my bag and went out after feeding Eros. Myungsoo was at my door. He looked normal...
 
"Yaah sort out your uniform. Do your top button. Tuck your shirt in. Sort out your tie. Remove your ear piercing." I shouted. He got startled.
 
"You never complained about my uniform", he pointed out.
 
"Well now I am. Now listen to me and sort out your uniform. If they don't give us the venue and hostel, I'll blame you", I said. He looked at my uniform.
 
"You should wear your glasses. You'll look more like the class president that way." he suggested. I took my glasses out and put them on.
 
"Now sort out your uniform", I said.
 
"But I don't wanna", he argued. He was starting to annoy me.
 
"Do it before I'll do it for you", I became impatient.
 
"I don't mind", he smiled. This little... I took a deep breath.
 
"Fine", I said.
 
"Really?" he asked in a surprised tone.
 
"Yes and I'll start by ripping that piercing out", I said. He gulbed.
 
"I'll do it myself then", he said. He sorted his uniform out and I watched making sure he really did.
 
"Now hand over that earring", I said. He handed over his earring.
 
"Not fair. Girls get to wear earrings", he complained.
 
"We look decent while doing so. You look like those people who'll be unemployed in 10 years", I said.
 
"You mean like a bad boy? Girls like bad boys. I mean I'm sure you do too", he said.
 
"Not exactly", I said bluntly.
 
"Do I look like a vice pres?" he asked.
 
"You are not the vice president. That doesn't even exist in our school." I said.
 
"Secreta-", he started. 
 
"You're not my secretary either", I shouted, "You are just an annoying guy who follows me around everywhere".
 
"Ow that hurt Pres", he said.
 
"It was meant to", I said bluntly. Monsoon came to the front door following the noise. He looked his brother up and down and broke out in laughter.
 
"No one could make him dress like this before", he laughed, "Wait I got an idea". He ran inside to get something. He handed a pair of fake specs to Myungsoo, which Myungsoo put on.
 
"You don't like bad boys. Do like good boys?" he asked smiling. I couldn't keep a straight face and chuckled.
 
"I'm model student Kim Myungsoo of class 11A and also the acting Vice president", he practiced a greeting.
 
"Okay enough, you'll make us late with your messing around", I giggled.
 
"I made the class Pres smile", he cheered.
 
"Enough. Let's go! Take care on your way to school", I said to Monsoon and we left for the train station. We went to platform 4 and waited for the train.
 
"Does this train go straight to the place?" he asked. I nodded. I turned around and started laughing after seeing 'Model student Kim Myungsoo'.
 
"It takes 2 hours to get there", I said after straightening up my face. The sign said '2 minutes
left'.
 
"I got a sandwich want one?" he asked.
 
"I'm fine I have my own food and I won't take sandwiches from you after yesterday", I laughed. I suddenly remembered the dream and Myungsoo's question. 'Do you like anyone? Might that be me?'. I thought about it. I shook my head.
 
"Of course it's not true. Don't think about those things Hyunsoo", I said to myself. Myungsoo gave me a weird look. I said that out loud. I looked around to see a few people looking at me. I smiled innocently. The train arrived and we got on. I sat down and Myungsoo came and sat next to me. People looked at me. Especially a group of girls.
 
"What are you doing idiot? You're attracting unwanted attention towards me", I whispered to him.
 
"What do you mean?" he asked while smiling. He obviously knew what I meant.
 
"Idiot! They'll get the wrong idea", I whispered back.
 
"Really? So girls do like good guys too", he thought. I face palmed myself. I got up and was about to walk off to another seat. He stopped me by grabbing my wrist.
 
"You are staying here. I didn't just come to annoy you throughout the journey, I came because I was worried." he said in a very quiet voice. I looked at him and sat down without talking back.
 
"We are only Class president and vice president", he said. 
 
"You're not the vice president", I pointed out breaking the awkward atmosphere between us. He laughed. Two hours past with us talking like that. We got off at our stop and walked out of the train station. It was only a two minute walk to the hostel. We were supposed to meet the owner at the front door. However when we arrived there was no one there apart from a boy not more than 3 years older than us. He wore a dark blue blazer over a light blue shirt and a blue tie. It was probably his school uniform. He had black hair and deep brown eyes. Just like Myungsoo he had a piercing on his left ear and his uniform wasn't in the best state. Despite all that he wasn't that bad looking. I went up to him.
 
"Excuse me do you know where the owner of this hostel is?" I asked. 
 
"You are Lee Hyunsoo?" he asked. I nodded. "I'm the grandson of the owner. He couldn't attend today so I was sent instead."
 
"Nice to meet you", I bowed.
 
"You look much younger than I imagined", he pointed out. I just smiled. He turned over to Myungsoo.
 
"And you are the vice president?" he asked.
 
"No I just came to study sociology!" he said. I face palmed myself while the boy looked confused.
 
"What's up with you?" I asked.
 
"You don't like me calling myself Vice president so I'm just a sociology student who came to observe how the class president socialises with people", he said.
 
"Please don't say anything and keep quiet", I said. 
 
"Aye aye", he agreed. 
 
"I'll show you around." the boy said.
 
"Thank you um..", I didn't know his name.
 
"I'm Kim Jaehyun." he smiled. He took us around the hostel. The rooms were alright in size. We went over to the venue which was absolutely stunning. It wasn't big but it looked very posh. The walls were white and the furnitures were also white to match the walls. The chandeliers where golden. We went outside and saw the beach.
 
"It takes around a minute to get to the beach. It's an amazing view in the summer", he explained to which Myungsoo and I just nodded insync. To be honest I would gave expected the price to be much higher for this place. We went to the main office and started to calculate the total. I predicted it to be much more than it actually costed. I paid and booked the place for 4 days and 3 nights. We both thanked him and left the place. Myungsoo held his hand out.
 
"My earring", he demanded while untucking his shirt.
 
"Doing you uniform right won't kill you", I said. He didn't respond but violently undid his top button and loosened his tie.
 
"Yes yes. You didn't get a bad impression of that dude back there. His uniform was worse than mine. He looked like a total delinquent!" Myungsoo said.
 
"Well..." I started off while putting the earring on.
 
"Exactly. You can undo your top button too. I don't want to be seen with a goody-two-shoes", he said in a rude tone. Although the other Myungsoo was embarrassing, I prefered him more than this one. This guy has some strange bipolar. We walked to the train station past an ice cream store. My eyes naturally fixed onto the store.
 
"Want some?" he asked. Lee Hyunsoo, you have to resist!
 
"I can tell by your expression. Go in", he said.
 
"No need", I said in a rude tone.
 
"Okay I won't shout at you! I'm sorry for taking my anger out on you earlier on", he apologized.
 
"I still don't want Ice cream!" I said.
 
"You can be so childish sometimes", he said and pushed me into the ice cream store. "It's my treat so just tell me what you want".
 
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LintangBerlyana #1
Chapter 68: Update soon author-nim ㅠㅠ
LintangBerlyana #2
Chapter 52: Oh.., I don't know why, but this chap made me sad :(
But I still love it btw :)
Angel_4evaurs_Chunji
#3
Chapter 68: Okay, sorry for not commenting, in a loooooooooooong time. Just found, the time to comment. Tbh, I read it when you published it, just didn't have time for commenting.

Anyways, back to the story: I'm glad MyungHyun are still going strong regarding their love-hate relationship as 'friends'. I like the fact, that she was brought together with the pabo maknaes and Young Mi, I felt so sorry for Young Mi for being put with them (not really, glad you did that, actually xD). It was nice, to see that Hyunsoo isn't a tough girl all the time, that she too can be scared, sure maybe not so easily, but she can be scared, that's great enough. Awwh, is that, a slightly worried Myungsoo, I see there? Hehe, I like that, it's chooo sweet! xD And, dude, why am I not surprised, by the mysterious men popping out of nowhere? You, always manage to bring a surprise element, in (in a good way, ofcourse). Can you tell, me who they are? Hehe. Although, they must be so creepy though, for them to go walking around and in what? A forest. I'm never going anywhere near a forest, not even 10 meters near it. Gosh... but not that I ever would, anyways..... Anyways, great update, thanks for your hard-work, unnie!

UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE... again, please. Lol, anyways I know your busy with work and all, don't worry I can wait.. I think xD Thanks again, unnie!
anitaklr24
#4
Chapter 68: I want to know who those man were, but I think it's gonna take time to find out. It was a great chapter and I hope to know what does Hyunsoo want to ask Myungsoo?
Well, it's my imagination or Myungsoo and Hyunsoo are starting to like each other, but neither of them realize?
Hugs ^^,
Coldlattae
#5
Chapter 68: Creepy... I am never going into a forest now xD
anitaklr24
#6
Chapter 67: Wow I think they are up to something.
I am a new reader here. I started reading it a few weeks ago and let me tell you this story is daebak.
I want to know if Hyunsoo is still living with her aunt or her mom return already?
Keep writing it!!! Hugs. ^^,
chiimii
#7
Chapter 67: -______________- Why do you always leave us with cliff-hangers! Seriously! This way, I will just keep demanding for more updates!! what took you so long with this one? Anyway, I should be grateful -.-' Thanks for the update!
comments on the story: Definitely, definitely, they must be up to something!! They seemed way too kind to be innocent! T_T Poor Young Mi - unless she is part of some plan.
LOL at Jongdae and the app being biased! xD His mental breakdown is hilarious. Hyunsoo, hehe, is with Minhwa and Myungsoo. That's fate I tell you, fate! LOL.
The items needed to be collected are useless... I guess the picture in front of the lighthouse is okayyish... LOL xDD But the legend is sooo sad. But there is no one to blame except the elder brother... I guess, the younger brother went over broad and killed innocent people too but still if the elder brother didn't do anything in the first place, I'm sure they all would have been happy T_T Stupid older brother!
Haha, Myungsoo was clever, it would take forever if you leave fifteen minutes gap between each group. Like only 4 groups could go in one hour T_T Two hours is a very long time LOL.
... Good luck Hyunsoo's team! I don't think Hyunsoo needs it though. It probably would end up being Minhwa and Myungsoo clinging onto her hahaha!
chiimii
#8
Chapter 66: PS I didn't vote by the way... So I wasn't one of them! There are actually 12 other people, excluding me, that read your fic - probably more but they are more of a silent type hehe. Anyway, I like the poster... It looks really cool and why is minhwa that boy, seriously... That boy always plays a role where he likes the main lead but gets heart broken it's soooo sad! T_T
Oooh well. I'm going to comment on the story now...
YES YES YES! EVEN THOUGH I SUPPORTED THE GIRLS (COUGHCOUGH), I ACTUALLY WANTED THE BOYS TO WIN (YOU KNEW BUT YEAH)! Yeah, the girls did great, I'm serious! But yeah, for the comedy to continue, i think the boy should have won... I will clap as well /claps like a hyper seal/
Minhwa is soooo nice! T_T Seriously, I just can't take how nice he is... Myungsoo is nice as well but in his own rude way...
HAHAHAHA, The way they looked at Minhwa when they found out it was his fault they missed a chance of running the girl's plans. Haha. SO funny. and the way Minhwa diverted the topic hehe.
That's just like Hyunsoo to declare officially who won... even though her team lost. Good going, Hyunsoo.
At first I thought the boys were actually rubbing it in the girls face they lost and got a little angry but then... they are nice LOL. 2SOO MOMENTS HEHEHE! OMG! SERIOUSLY THAT WAS SO CUTE, in Myungsoo's way I guess LOL...
Seriously, that Eunji and Minho character reminds me of someone from school, dude... Hehe! Awww, about the mixed feelings...
Hahaha, when is HyunJae ever right LOL...
A forest....? I thought it was going to be a dragon!! BUT SERIOUSLY I WANT TO KNOW WHAT GOES IN THE FOREST... IT'S INTRIGUING!!

5000 words aren't enough when you stop at such interesting part LOL... Hurry up and update!! xDD
chiimii
#9
Chapter 65: LOL. You don't understand how happy I get when I see this story getting updated. Actually you probably do lol... Anyway, what's up with the cliffhangers T_T I wanted to know who wins seriously. I think it's the girls though... Or it might be a draw and go into overtime... But I seriously hope Myungsoo came to his senses and tapped the ball into the girl's net, who just stood there dumb folded... Basically, what I'm trying to say is I want to boys to win and see the girls get bossed around because I can just imagine it and it makes me want to LOL.
Okay, back to the beginning of the chapter:
Your poster thingy making skills are really cool. I like them hehe. They seriously help me imagine the game... and for the rest of the people whom I don't know, I just imagine blank faces on bodies that are either similar to Hyunsoo or Myungsoo LOL.
I'm so glad the boy didn't find out about the position planning thingy... Myungsoo seriously, what sight he has T_T GO BLIND! Actually, don't! lol, and the girls just couldn't make it any less obvious could they. Thank god, Hyunsoo said something and Hooray to Jihyun! Minhwa just doesn't even know what he has done T_T LOL.
Oh yeah... I forgot about the teacher as well LOL. Tut tut tut... But the whole party thing was just to cover up for that piece of paper anyway so even the girls wasn't expecting it...
-.-' Hyunsoo and her fairness. And yes boys, this is going to be a tough game... They underestimated the girls and ended up giving them more chances to win T_T what idiots... But you have to consider that the boys caught up within 13 mins and it took the girls 25 mins to gain 4/5 goals. So claps for the boys LOL...
Now I just want to know who wins!! Can you update again...? Like today!! If you want to update tomorrow, then can you update in like 6 hours, which technically would be tomorrow here... I am not sure about the other countries but yeah...

I improved didn't I? I didn't use caps lol...
chiimii
#10
Chapter 64: YAAAAAAAY! Another update! I'm so glad you are back updating this story, like seriously. It's exciting hehe. But seriously, I want to see the volleyball game!! WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING IT? WHY ARE YOU KEEPING ME WAITING LIKE THIS? DO YOU WANT TO SEE ME DIE? IS THAT WHY?
back to the story: GO HYUNSOO, GO GIRLS. She is seriously piped up isn't she now? hehe. LOL at the way she held onto Minhwa's hand like this game is going to determine who is going to die and who is going to live. Calm down, Hyunsoo, this isn't the hunger games hahaha!
LOL... I think there is going to be more punishment than just going to buy some drinks, girls. Watch out, I'm telling you... You better win hehe.
... Don't you think the girls are getting a little overconfident? LOL... Oh, and LOL, nice use of powerpoint. It actually looks good.
/face palm/ What are the boys doing? They are soo stupid, seriously T_T it makes me cry. And good idea, Hyunsoo - make them think you were just eating hehe.
YAAAAY! 2SOO moments! hehe! The way Minhwa and Myungsoo just sat on Hyunsoo's bed LOL. Makes me laugh. And the way Myungsoo just ignores Hyunsoo LOL!
Awww, Minhwa is soo sweet with the sweets. AND OMG, THEY FOUND OUT ABOUT THE POSITIONS THINGY!!! DAAAAAMN. WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT??


P.S: Like I said before... My caps - I don't know why I use them, I just do LOL.