I declare war!!

A Wall In between

 

All of a sudden, a loud tune came on. The doorbell?
Unexpected visitors? I Wonder who...
 
Mum opened the door as I brought my attention back to my work. 
 
I was just about to coutinue when mum yelled "Hyunsoo" giving me a fright. 
 
"Come and welcome our new neighboughs." Great there goes my free time. I got up and made my way downstairs, as soon as I entered I was greeted by a cold stare. The shock on my face clearly showed. 
 
"Go and get them tea, Hyunsoo." I quickly straightened up and headed straight to the kitchen to get tea. What is he doing here in MY house? Isn't torturing me infront of my class enough for him? Does he have to come here and embrass me infront of my mum aswell? Aish, and I thought things couldnt get worse. I went back to see, my mum getting on so well with his. 
 
I placed the tray full cups of tea and gave out plates of pudding. I took my seat and returned Myungsoo's glares while my mum served. It was awkward. His mum and mine were talking non stop while Myungsoo, his brother and I sat there staring into space. I realized how much his brother resembled Myungsoo. He's just younger and a bit shorter but just as handsome with the same black messy hair and slim bulit body. You can tell they are brothers just by looking at them. His mum seems to be in her mid fourties, around my height with shoulderlength black hair.
 
My mum noticed how uncomforable it was for us so she decided to give them a tour around our house. I didn't want to sit there like a loner so I decided to tag along. My mum took the lead his mum by her side with his brother and him close behind. I followed the two brothers right at the end.
 
What a covincidence, my door was wide open which caught everyones attention. My room wasn't much. A single bed in the corner next to the window with pink bed sheets. Beside it, was a little bed table with a few mangas scattered all over it. In the other coner I had my desk with my maths homework on it. Quiet messy but it could be worse. Top right coner, was three shelves with a few awards on the top, study books in the middle and manga books at the bottom. There was a small white table in the middle of the room. Similar to a coffee table I guess. It also had some manga books and tea cups scattered on it. Underneath the table was a pink rug which was placed on our the wooden floor. The walls were light pink. I have a piano against one of the walls which I covered with a white blanket. I used to play the piano a long time ago but I decided to quit. I looked up after examining my room everyone was staring in like they never saw anything like it in their lives. Is it that bad? I've seen worse though. I glanced up at my mum who gave me a disappointed look. Now that I look at it as a whole, it was really messy. I turned and looked at Myungsoo's brother whose attention was completely on the manga books. 
 
"You read manga. That's awesome!". His voice was filled with excitement. Then I looked at Myungsoo who was staring at the piano covered with a white blanket with an emotionless face. It seems to have caught his attention. His expression darkened. Maybe he doesn't like music. Or maybe he just didn't expect me to play an instrument. 
 
He felt my stare and quickly changed his attention on my desk where he spotted my maths homework. 
 
"We had maths homework? I completely forgot", he said. 
 
"You should better go and do it. Our teacher is really nice but he is really strict when it comes to homework.' I replied. 
 
Everyone gave us confused looks. 
 
"What are you two talking about?" asked Myungsoo's brother. 
 
"We go to the same school", Myungsoo replied. 
 
"We are actually in the same class", I added. Everyones stares hardened. 
 
"You could have told us before dear." said mum. Well noone asked us. 
 
"Mum I'm going home I need to do the homework", he said and headed downstairs, with me following behind. It reminded me of our little walk through the corridor. This was the perfect opportunity to push him but as tempting as it was, I couldn't allow myself to commit such a sin. We reached the front door. He opened the door and I looked at him step outside. 
 
He left the house with his final words "You were the one who made the pudding right. It was full of holes. It goes to show that you are a beginner.", he was about to shut the door. I quickly put my foot between him and the door preventing him from shutting it and said 
 
"Are you trying to declare a war. If it's a war you want its a war you'll get!" and then slammed the door shut.
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LintangBerlyana #1
Chapter 68: Update soon author-nim ㅠㅠ
LintangBerlyana #2
Chapter 52: Oh.., I don't know why, but this chap made me sad :(
But I still love it btw :)
Angel_4evaurs_Chunji
#3
Chapter 68: Okay, sorry for not commenting, in a loooooooooooong time. Just found, the time to comment. Tbh, I read it when you published it, just didn't have time for commenting.

Anyways, back to the story: I'm glad MyungHyun are still going strong regarding their love-hate relationship as 'friends'. I like the fact, that she was brought together with the pabo maknaes and Young Mi, I felt so sorry for Young Mi for being put with them (not really, glad you did that, actually xD). It was nice, to see that Hyunsoo isn't a tough girl all the time, that she too can be scared, sure maybe not so easily, but she can be scared, that's great enough. Awwh, is that, a slightly worried Myungsoo, I see there? Hehe, I like that, it's chooo sweet! xD And, dude, why am I not surprised, by the mysterious men popping out of nowhere? You, always manage to bring a surprise element, in (in a good way, ofcourse). Can you tell, me who they are? Hehe. Although, they must be so creepy though, for them to go walking around and in what? A forest. I'm never going anywhere near a forest, not even 10 meters near it. Gosh... but not that I ever would, anyways..... Anyways, great update, thanks for your hard-work, unnie!

UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE... again, please. Lol, anyways I know your busy with work and all, don't worry I can wait.. I think xD Thanks again, unnie!
anitaklr24
#4
Chapter 68: I want to know who those man were, but I think it's gonna take time to find out. It was a great chapter and I hope to know what does Hyunsoo want to ask Myungsoo?
Well, it's my imagination or Myungsoo and Hyunsoo are starting to like each other, but neither of them realize?
Hugs ^^,
Coldlattae
#5
Chapter 68: Creepy... I am never going into a forest now xD
anitaklr24
#6
Chapter 67: Wow I think they are up to something.
I am a new reader here. I started reading it a few weeks ago and let me tell you this story is daebak.
I want to know if Hyunsoo is still living with her aunt or her mom return already?
Keep writing it!!! Hugs. ^^,
chiimii
#7
Chapter 67: -______________- Why do you always leave us with cliff-hangers! Seriously! This way, I will just keep demanding for more updates!! what took you so long with this one? Anyway, I should be grateful -.-' Thanks for the update!
comments on the story: Definitely, definitely, they must be up to something!! They seemed way too kind to be innocent! T_T Poor Young Mi - unless she is part of some plan.
LOL at Jongdae and the app being biased! xD His mental breakdown is hilarious. Hyunsoo, hehe, is with Minhwa and Myungsoo. That's fate I tell you, fate! LOL.
The items needed to be collected are useless... I guess the picture in front of the lighthouse is okayyish... LOL xDD But the legend is sooo sad. But there is no one to blame except the elder brother... I guess, the younger brother went over broad and killed innocent people too but still if the elder brother didn't do anything in the first place, I'm sure they all would have been happy T_T Stupid older brother!
Haha, Myungsoo was clever, it would take forever if you leave fifteen minutes gap between each group. Like only 4 groups could go in one hour T_T Two hours is a very long time LOL.
... Good luck Hyunsoo's team! I don't think Hyunsoo needs it though. It probably would end up being Minhwa and Myungsoo clinging onto her hahaha!
chiimii
#8
Chapter 66: PS I didn't vote by the way... So I wasn't one of them! There are actually 12 other people, excluding me, that read your fic - probably more but they are more of a silent type hehe. Anyway, I like the poster... It looks really cool and why is minhwa that boy, seriously... That boy always plays a role where he likes the main lead but gets heart broken it's soooo sad! T_T
Oooh well. I'm going to comment on the story now...
YES YES YES! EVEN THOUGH I SUPPORTED THE GIRLS (COUGHCOUGH), I ACTUALLY WANTED THE BOYS TO WIN (YOU KNEW BUT YEAH)! Yeah, the girls did great, I'm serious! But yeah, for the comedy to continue, i think the boy should have won... I will clap as well /claps like a hyper seal/
Minhwa is soooo nice! T_T Seriously, I just can't take how nice he is... Myungsoo is nice as well but in his own rude way...
HAHAHAHA, The way they looked at Minhwa when they found out it was his fault they missed a chance of running the girl's plans. Haha. SO funny. and the way Minhwa diverted the topic hehe.
That's just like Hyunsoo to declare officially who won... even though her team lost. Good going, Hyunsoo.
At first I thought the boys were actually rubbing it in the girls face they lost and got a little angry but then... they are nice LOL. 2SOO MOMENTS HEHEHE! OMG! SERIOUSLY THAT WAS SO CUTE, in Myungsoo's way I guess LOL...
Seriously, that Eunji and Minho character reminds me of someone from school, dude... Hehe! Awww, about the mixed feelings...
Hahaha, when is HyunJae ever right LOL...
A forest....? I thought it was going to be a dragon!! BUT SERIOUSLY I WANT TO KNOW WHAT GOES IN THE FOREST... IT'S INTRIGUING!!

5000 words aren't enough when you stop at such interesting part LOL... Hurry up and update!! xDD
chiimii
#9
Chapter 65: LOL. You don't understand how happy I get when I see this story getting updated. Actually you probably do lol... Anyway, what's up with the cliffhangers T_T I wanted to know who wins seriously. I think it's the girls though... Or it might be a draw and go into overtime... But I seriously hope Myungsoo came to his senses and tapped the ball into the girl's net, who just stood there dumb folded... Basically, what I'm trying to say is I want to boys to win and see the girls get bossed around because I can just imagine it and it makes me want to LOL.
Okay, back to the beginning of the chapter:
Your poster thingy making skills are really cool. I like them hehe. They seriously help me imagine the game... and for the rest of the people whom I don't know, I just imagine blank faces on bodies that are either similar to Hyunsoo or Myungsoo LOL.
I'm so glad the boy didn't find out about the position planning thingy... Myungsoo seriously, what sight he has T_T GO BLIND! Actually, don't! lol, and the girls just couldn't make it any less obvious could they. Thank god, Hyunsoo said something and Hooray to Jihyun! Minhwa just doesn't even know what he has done T_T LOL.
Oh yeah... I forgot about the teacher as well LOL. Tut tut tut... But the whole party thing was just to cover up for that piece of paper anyway so even the girls wasn't expecting it...
-.-' Hyunsoo and her fairness. And yes boys, this is going to be a tough game... They underestimated the girls and ended up giving them more chances to win T_T what idiots... But you have to consider that the boys caught up within 13 mins and it took the girls 25 mins to gain 4/5 goals. So claps for the boys LOL...
Now I just want to know who wins!! Can you update again...? Like today!! If you want to update tomorrow, then can you update in like 6 hours, which technically would be tomorrow here... I am not sure about the other countries but yeah...

I improved didn't I? I didn't use caps lol...
chiimii
#10
Chapter 64: YAAAAAAAY! Another update! I'm so glad you are back updating this story, like seriously. It's exciting hehe. But seriously, I want to see the volleyball game!! WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING IT? WHY ARE YOU KEEPING ME WAITING LIKE THIS? DO YOU WANT TO SEE ME DIE? IS THAT WHY?
back to the story: GO HYUNSOO, GO GIRLS. She is seriously piped up isn't she now? hehe. LOL at the way she held onto Minhwa's hand like this game is going to determine who is going to die and who is going to live. Calm down, Hyunsoo, this isn't the hunger games hahaha!
LOL... I think there is going to be more punishment than just going to buy some drinks, girls. Watch out, I'm telling you... You better win hehe.
... Don't you think the girls are getting a little overconfident? LOL... Oh, and LOL, nice use of powerpoint. It actually looks good.
/face palm/ What are the boys doing? They are soo stupid, seriously T_T it makes me cry. And good idea, Hyunsoo - make them think you were just eating hehe.
YAAAAY! 2SOO moments! hehe! The way Minhwa and Myungsoo just sat on Hyunsoo's bed LOL. Makes me laugh. And the way Myungsoo just ignores Hyunsoo LOL!
Awww, Minhwa is soo sweet with the sweets. AND OMG, THEY FOUND OUT ABOUT THE POSITIONS THINGY!!! DAAAAAMN. WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT??


P.S: Like I said before... My caps - I don't know why I use them, I just do LOL.