Lingering Despair

Description

 

A moment of despair slapped into Myungsoo's life, twice; once when his mother passed away, and another when he realized the true meaning of love and friendship. 

 

Foreword

 

Sungyeol collided his sturdy frame with Sungjong’s delicate one, his arms wrapped around the other’s shoulders. Sungjong stood there stiffly, not moving for a moment with widened eyes, slightly opened lips and bright red cheeks. He finally came back to senses and tried to push away but Sungyeol tightened his hold. Not knowing what to do, he stayed put, his hands hanging on both side of his body. He looked to his left to see Sungyeol so peaceful.

I quickly walked into the classroom and took my seat. I placed my cheek on the table and closed my eyes. Defying my will, my mind replayed the loving embrace a couple of time, which made my soul wretched. From that moment, I learned that Sungyeol had feelings for Sungjong. Sungjong, probably, likes him too. Who wouldn’t like a person like him? Just saying it made my breathing pace slow down.

 

 
 
Extras - 
Prompt: I know how it feels when people look right through you, or worse, see you as something or someone other than what you are - Ally Condie in -Reached' 
The person who motivated and helped me with ideas is cherryblossomzee (a friend from school). 
 
Note: Always follow your heart and not society. Have self-assurance and blank out what negative people think about you.
Warning: This might be a little violent. 
 
[13.10.2013] - title changed from despairing dive to lingering despair. foreword/description changed as well. 
 

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bohyemi #1
Chapter 5: You remember Robbort Frost well
Divergin1004
#2
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flamzfox
#3
Tata, darling ^^
Upvoted because I really, really liked this story. I actually read it last week but couldn't get around to writing the review until today. I'll leave everything else in the review <3
cherryblossomzee
#4
Chapter 5: Bang Da Sung you are like Myungsoo, afraid to show your love for Sungjong. Chiimii you made Sungjong suffer a lot. I knew it was coming but it still made me sad. That moment where Sungyeol carried Sungjong was so cute! Poor Myungsoo had to see that. It must have hurt. I'm glad Yeoljong got together.I love Myungjong but Yeoljong was meant for this fic :). Myungsoo I'm proud of you. You took the correct path. A path that is difficult but rewarding. Thank you for writing this wonderful fic! I love it!

:)
bohyemi #5
Chapter 5: this was just beautiful
beautifully painful
-Lils- #6
beautiful written, thanks for sharing ~
miira18
#7
Chapter 5: this story was very beautiful, i'm sorry if i commented late but really Myungsoo's uncertainty and his feelings towards Sungjong and Sungyeol's relationship is very human, he got jealous, he wish he was in yeol's place but his still very frighten :(
KingLru #8
Chapter 5: O.O First of all, written so freaking well and it was freaking flawless. Second you're kidding right unnie? TT.TT I was tearing up at the end. Overall I loved reading this, I just loved it.
procrastperfection
#9
Chapter 3: Holy Shisus that got dark quick! I honestly don't know what to expect (and I mean that in a good way). I can't wait for the next chapter.
Minnea #10
Chapter 3: How does this not have more reviews!!!? Hurry I hate Bang Da Sung for hurting Sungjong