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Description

 
Versaemerge review shop.


established on 07/25/13
by vecember (vise)
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about
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Opened in 2013, Versaemerge review shop (prev. blue crystal) is here to help writers and have their stories critiqued. every review will be honest and nothing will be sugarcoated, please keep this in mind while requesting your story.

unless specified, all reviews will be ungraded with focus on everything.

- ♥ Vise.
 
rules
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
How the review is done is purely up to you, this is meant to help you, not me. If you do not want the standard, ungraded, review, then you can take a pick here.

Standard Reviews.
these are the normal criteria. i will write what i see fit and will not prioritze one section over another. these will be ungraded unless specified.

personalized review.
if you feel as if you struggle more on one section (e.g. plot, setting, etc.) you can ask me to focus more on that section over the others.

graded reviews.
if you need/want a grade attached to your review or if that is what you are comfortable with, that can be done (criteria/grading below). i will gladly change it for you. don't be afraid to ask.
EVALUATION
01. Subscribe. upvoting is optional but appreciated. after you have picked up your review from the shop, you are allowed to unsubscribe.
02. After your review has been completed, you have two weeks to pick it up before being submitted to the blacklist. reviewing does take time so i'd like to know that you saw it.
03. credit the shop. i will be checking a week after the review has been published.
04. To request, leave a comment down below. please include the story link of the story you want reviewed. you may look at the evaluation guide if you need.
05. please don't bash the review or any other author that submits their stories. if you have an issue with the review, you can always dm me and i will talk it out with you.
* Please do not get mad at me if your review isn't what you expected/wanted. in the real world, there is a lot of trial and error. you will be criticized and not everything you do will be liked by everyone. I'm here to help you, not hurt you.
general rules
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pending list
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
title (/5)
is the title eyecatching? interesting? if i were to see it on a bookshelf, would i pick it up?

description/foreword (/10)
Does the description make me want to read the story? or does it not?

plot [/50]
Plot is the most important aspect of your story. is there a plot? does the plot make sense? have loopholes?

writing style/flow  [/20]
Grammar mistakes? punctuation mistakes? sentences that don't make sense? does your story flow well or is it rocky?

characterization [/10]
Are your characters interesting? mary sues? are they boring/flat?

personal enjoyment [/5]
did i personally enjoy the story? would i remember it? just an opinion section, really.







 
vecember
With school starting back up again soon, I probably won't be doing many reviews, if at all. We'll see about it though. Thank you for everyone who has requested so far and over the years, I've really learned a lot from reviewing stories and shiz. ♥

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13thWomanAds
#1
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bae-jinki
#2
Hi! I would like a personalized graded review!
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/758094

I went on a hiatus with this story and I wanna come back to it and I have lots of plans for it. I just want an honest and constructive criticism to see if the story is alright and everything adds up. If the pace is good, if it's enjoyable, what I can fix and most importantly are the characters consistent. Are there any characters (Yongguk especially) that is flaky/inconsistent. Thanks so much!
P.S.... I feel like I’m writing/punctuating my dialogue wrong so please please please feel free to educate me and correct me because I want to know.
Moony_Kat
#3
Chapter 18: Hi there^^ Thank you very much for the review and don't worry, I get it - historical Au stories aren't everyone's cup of tea, so it's alright^^ Thank you for your honest review though :) I'll try to speed up the story a bit, but it was thought so that it's slow cooked ;.;
I already credited you in the foreword! Sorry for the long wait but it took me a bit of time to get to my laptop ;.;
kamski
#4
Chapter 17: Hello! Thank you so much for the review I'll be leaving my proper pick up comment tomorrow!
Moony_Kat
#5
Hi^^ I'm back :) Hope you don't mind^^' I'd like to request a graded review for 'Les Fleurs du Mal' (slow cooked story, I apologize in advance)

https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1254272/les-fleurs-du-mal-angst-romance-tragedy-originalcharacter-historical-jin-jimin-bts-historicalau-kingdomau-rapmonster-jhope-jungkook-suga-namjoon-redvelvetjoy-winnertaehyun

Thank you <3 (in case I don't pick up soon after you post it, it'll most probably because I've got no internet - I'm moving countries this month; just thought I should tell you just so that you don't feel bad in case I'm late picking up ;.;)
kamski
#6
Hi, I would like to request a standard/graded review for my story, thank you!
https://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1339950
Lilymay99 #7
Chapter 16: Hi, thank you so much for the detailed and informative review! Everything you said was pretty spot on and I really appreciated the honest feedback. I can only imagine how many stories you have to read with stuff you’re not really into, so I’m glad you somewhat enjoyed yourself while reading my mine. Thanks again and I hope you can continue with your reviewing since it is super helpful for us authors :)
Xophias
#8
Chapter 15: I've check out your reviews, and from the stories I'v red, your points are really accurate!Really well done!
Moony_Kat
#9
Chapter 15: Hi there! Thank you very much for the in depth, honest and detailed review! <3 I can't tell you how much I appreciate such feedback since my readers barely leave comments ;.; Reading your review, I can get a glimpse into what stirred curiosity for the readers and what maybe made them reluctant to keep reading, so I will definitely try to include more of the backstory to understand why things are like that between Hanbin and Jennie/Junhoe but also what happened to Jennie :) I'll try to cut on the violence or make the description less gory I guess^^'
Haha, I do agree with you on Jennie, lil snake :))
Again, super mega thnaks for the review and I am so happy to know you enjoyed the story!<3 Hope you'll stay till the end^^