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A Wall In between

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As I approached the playground, I saw who it really was. 
 
Myungsoo?
 
I went and sat on the swing next to him. He didnt notice me.
 
"Yah Myungsoo what happened?", I asked. No response.
 
I started to swing. 
 
"If there is something wrong, you've got a good listener sitting next to you",I said. He smiled. He faced up and looked at me.
 
"How did you know?", he asked.
 
"You havent been yourself for the whole week and plus you dropped from being the ranked number one to number seven", I said.
 
I gave out a little laugh. "Those are just ranks. Useless numbers. What can you accomplish with them?", he asked. I didnt know how to answer. I kept quiet for a while and stopped swinging.
 
"You are right. Ranks are mere numbers. But what do you want to accomplish by acting this way all the time? Dont you care where life is going to take you anymore?", I asked.
 
"You just love to ask these sorts of questions right", he said.
 
"Says the one who said that its better to talk to someone", I laughed. He smiled.
 
"Well at night I've been getting these nightmares. The same nightmare for the past few days", he started off. A nightmare? He continued.
 
"I am one of those people who had their first love at a young age. I'm only 15 but I had my first love at 13, 2 years ago. She was a noona?"
 
"Noona...?", I wondered.
 
"Well she was older than me by months but I loved her a lot"
 
I looked up. "You already had your first love? I'm so envious", I said.
 
"But she left me...", he stopped. I turned to him.
 
"She didnt date me because she loved me, she dated me to make others jealous, to prove that she could make someone younger fall for her".
 
"Woaah, no wonder you back away from girls", I said. "Not all girls are like that though. You were probably really immature back then. No offence though.", I stopped and looked up to the sky. It was snowing.
 
"You see Myungsoo, there is a difference between love and true love. You can love anyone, even if that person is not the right person. But true love is totally different. Its when you", I stopped again and looked down. I didnt know what to say. 
 
"What is it?", he asked.
 
"I dont know what true love actually is", I admitted. "But its a feeling you get that you get for no other. Your heart would tell you straight if its the right person of not. If it comes to love, its your heart that should be thinking and not your brain. Thats why people in love end up in weird situations sometimes", I giggled and turned around to look at Myungsoo who was staring at me. Oh god what did I just say. Its embarrassing. I looked down. He giggled too.  
 
"Whether you are right or not it doesnt matter. After all both of us dont know the right answer.", he said. I was still looking on the floor. 
 
"Well just get up now. You are going to catch a cold in the snow", he said after getting up and pulling me out of my seat. "Who knows maybe we will know the true meaning in the future", he smiled.
 
I've never seen this side to Myungsoo. He was a lot different from who I used to know. A completely different person with the same face as him.
 
"Here", he said after putting his coat on me. "You are so stupid. Just walking around in school uniform in this weather."
 
"Arent you going to be cold? I mean it is snowing and you are only wearing a hoodie!", I asked.
 
"Just shut up and keep it", he said. Thats the Myungsoo I knew. I cant win against this Myungsoo. I kept thinking. He has so many sides to him. Back there that was a Myungsoo I've never seen before. Someone who was willing to open up and express his feelings. Also on that day. He was understanding and a good listener. Its like they are completely different people. I turned around to look at him. He was about to fall asleep while walking.
 
"Yaah Myungsoo dont fall asleep", I shouted. He didnt respond. His eyes were starting to shut but he tried his best to keep them open.
 
"Myungsoo?", I called while tapping his arm. He isnt responding. After a few seconds he collapsed into the white snow.
 
"Myungsoo", I bent down trying to shake his up. I felt his forehead. He was burning up. I took the coat of and lifted him up and put it on him. I took my phone and dialled for the ambulance. I tried to keep him warm and supported him by holding him in order for him not to fall into the snow. A few moments later the ambulance arrived to take us to the hospital. In the ambulance his temperature, blood pressure and blood sugar levels were checked. The paramedics had a brief discussion.
 
"Um excuse me? I was wondering what his temperature is.", I asked.
 
"Its 40.6.", she answered. My expression darkened. I heard so many times that people died with such high temperatures.
 
"Was he under stress lately", another man asked. I remembered what he told me about his nightmares.
 
"We had exams this week", I made up. "He didnt sleep for a week and didnt eat properly". Their faces brightened up.
 
" Its probably just the stress that caused him to get a high temperature.", the lady said.  My face brightened up.
 
"He can be dismissed after he gains conciousness. Just makes sure he rests a lot and eats normally". I nodded.
 
"Good thing you were there to call the ambulance though. I dont think anyone could survive in this weather." I nodded once again.
 
"Are you his girlfriend?", the man asked. 
 
"Huh?"
 
"Are you his girlfriend?", he repeated.
 
"No no no", I exclaimed. "Just his neighbour". They smiled and we went to the hospital. They put Myungsoo on a bed until he regained conciousness and also gave him glucose solution through his arm. When he woke up he looked around.
 
"Geez I cant believe you. This much commotion over a nightmare", I complained. He didnt say anything.
 
"Sorry to make you worry this much.", he answered. It was the other side of him. I smiled.
 
I helped him up and after the doctor saw him we could go back home. We didnt talk much in the bus. Myungsoo seemed to feel really bad.
 
"You dont have to blame yourself. Just make sure to not stress so much over a nightmare. Just flip the pillow onto the good side", I joked. He finally laughed. I dropped him of and before I could enter the house he stopped me.
 
"Hey do you want to go and see a movie?", he asked.
 
"Huh?"
 
"That movie by that dude. Lee Dongho was it?"
 
"Lee Minho", I shouted.
 
"Yes yes him. I got two tickets"
 
"Why so suddenly?", I asked.
 
"As a thank you and as a sorry.", he whispered. "Anyways be ready at 11am tomorrow morning!", he said before going in.
 
I went inside my house and shut the door.
 
"Lee Minho, Lee Minho", I sang. I stopped.
 
"Wait! We are going alone?!"
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LintangBerlyana #1
Chapter 68: Update soon author-nim ㅠㅠ
LintangBerlyana #2
Chapter 52: Oh.., I don't know why, but this chap made me sad :(
But I still love it btw :)
Angel_4evaurs_Chunji
#3
Chapter 68: Okay, sorry for not commenting, in a loooooooooooong time. Just found, the time to comment. Tbh, I read it when you published it, just didn't have time for commenting.

Anyways, back to the story: I'm glad MyungHyun are still going strong regarding their love-hate relationship as 'friends'. I like the fact, that she was brought together with the pabo maknaes and Young Mi, I felt so sorry for Young Mi for being put with them (not really, glad you did that, actually xD). It was nice, to see that Hyunsoo isn't a tough girl all the time, that she too can be scared, sure maybe not so easily, but she can be scared, that's great enough. Awwh, is that, a slightly worried Myungsoo, I see there? Hehe, I like that, it's chooo sweet! xD And, dude, why am I not surprised, by the mysterious men popping out of nowhere? You, always manage to bring a surprise element, in (in a good way, ofcourse). Can you tell, me who they are? Hehe. Although, they must be so creepy though, for them to go walking around and in what? A forest. I'm never going anywhere near a forest, not even 10 meters near it. Gosh... but not that I ever would, anyways..... Anyways, great update, thanks for your hard-work, unnie!

UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE... again, please. Lol, anyways I know your busy with work and all, don't worry I can wait.. I think xD Thanks again, unnie!
anitaklr24
#4
Chapter 68: I want to know who those man were, but I think it's gonna take time to find out. It was a great chapter and I hope to know what does Hyunsoo want to ask Myungsoo?
Well, it's my imagination or Myungsoo and Hyunsoo are starting to like each other, but neither of them realize?
Hugs ^^,
Coldlattae
#5
Chapter 68: Creepy... I am never going into a forest now xD
anitaklr24
#6
Chapter 67: Wow I think they are up to something.
I am a new reader here. I started reading it a few weeks ago and let me tell you this story is daebak.
I want to know if Hyunsoo is still living with her aunt or her mom return already?
Keep writing it!!! Hugs. ^^,
chiimii
#7
Chapter 67: -______________- Why do you always leave us with cliff-hangers! Seriously! This way, I will just keep demanding for more updates!! what took you so long with this one? Anyway, I should be grateful -.-' Thanks for the update!
comments on the story: Definitely, definitely, they must be up to something!! They seemed way too kind to be innocent! T_T Poor Young Mi - unless she is part of some plan.
LOL at Jongdae and the app being biased! xD His mental breakdown is hilarious. Hyunsoo, hehe, is with Minhwa and Myungsoo. That's fate I tell you, fate! LOL.
The items needed to be collected are useless... I guess the picture in front of the lighthouse is okayyish... LOL xDD But the legend is sooo sad. But there is no one to blame except the elder brother... I guess, the younger brother went over broad and killed innocent people too but still if the elder brother didn't do anything in the first place, I'm sure they all would have been happy T_T Stupid older brother!
Haha, Myungsoo was clever, it would take forever if you leave fifteen minutes gap between each group. Like only 4 groups could go in one hour T_T Two hours is a very long time LOL.
... Good luck Hyunsoo's team! I don't think Hyunsoo needs it though. It probably would end up being Minhwa and Myungsoo clinging onto her hahaha!
chiimii
#8
Chapter 66: PS I didn't vote by the way... So I wasn't one of them! There are actually 12 other people, excluding me, that read your fic - probably more but they are more of a silent type hehe. Anyway, I like the poster... It looks really cool and why is minhwa that boy, seriously... That boy always plays a role where he likes the main lead but gets heart broken it's soooo sad! T_T
Oooh well. I'm going to comment on the story now...
YES YES YES! EVEN THOUGH I SUPPORTED THE GIRLS (COUGHCOUGH), I ACTUALLY WANTED THE BOYS TO WIN (YOU KNEW BUT YEAH)! Yeah, the girls did great, I'm serious! But yeah, for the comedy to continue, i think the boy should have won... I will clap as well /claps like a hyper seal/
Minhwa is soooo nice! T_T Seriously, I just can't take how nice he is... Myungsoo is nice as well but in his own rude way...
HAHAHAHA, The way they looked at Minhwa when they found out it was his fault they missed a chance of running the girl's plans. Haha. SO funny. and the way Minhwa diverted the topic hehe.
That's just like Hyunsoo to declare officially who won... even though her team lost. Good going, Hyunsoo.
At first I thought the boys were actually rubbing it in the girls face they lost and got a little angry but then... they are nice LOL. 2SOO MOMENTS HEHEHE! OMG! SERIOUSLY THAT WAS SO CUTE, in Myungsoo's way I guess LOL...
Seriously, that Eunji and Minho character reminds me of someone from school, dude... Hehe! Awww, about the mixed feelings...
Hahaha, when is HyunJae ever right LOL...
A forest....? I thought it was going to be a dragon!! BUT SERIOUSLY I WANT TO KNOW WHAT GOES IN THE FOREST... IT'S INTRIGUING!!

5000 words aren't enough when you stop at such interesting part LOL... Hurry up and update!! xDD
chiimii
#9
Chapter 65: LOL. You don't understand how happy I get when I see this story getting updated. Actually you probably do lol... Anyway, what's up with the cliffhangers T_T I wanted to know who wins seriously. I think it's the girls though... Or it might be a draw and go into overtime... But I seriously hope Myungsoo came to his senses and tapped the ball into the girl's net, who just stood there dumb folded... Basically, what I'm trying to say is I want to boys to win and see the girls get bossed around because I can just imagine it and it makes me want to LOL.
Okay, back to the beginning of the chapter:
Your poster thingy making skills are really cool. I like them hehe. They seriously help me imagine the game... and for the rest of the people whom I don't know, I just imagine blank faces on bodies that are either similar to Hyunsoo or Myungsoo LOL.
I'm so glad the boy didn't find out about the position planning thingy... Myungsoo seriously, what sight he has T_T GO BLIND! Actually, don't! lol, and the girls just couldn't make it any less obvious could they. Thank god, Hyunsoo said something and Hooray to Jihyun! Minhwa just doesn't even know what he has done T_T LOL.
Oh yeah... I forgot about the teacher as well LOL. Tut tut tut... But the whole party thing was just to cover up for that piece of paper anyway so even the girls wasn't expecting it...
-.-' Hyunsoo and her fairness. And yes boys, this is going to be a tough game... They underestimated the girls and ended up giving them more chances to win T_T what idiots... But you have to consider that the boys caught up within 13 mins and it took the girls 25 mins to gain 4/5 goals. So claps for the boys LOL...
Now I just want to know who wins!! Can you update again...? Like today!! If you want to update tomorrow, then can you update in like 6 hours, which technically would be tomorrow here... I am not sure about the other countries but yeah...

I improved didn't I? I didn't use caps lol...
chiimii
#10
Chapter 64: YAAAAAAAY! Another update! I'm so glad you are back updating this story, like seriously. It's exciting hehe. But seriously, I want to see the volleyball game!! WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING IT? WHY ARE YOU KEEPING ME WAITING LIKE THIS? DO YOU WANT TO SEE ME DIE? IS THAT WHY?
back to the story: GO HYUNSOO, GO GIRLS. She is seriously piped up isn't she now? hehe. LOL at the way she held onto Minhwa's hand like this game is going to determine who is going to die and who is going to live. Calm down, Hyunsoo, this isn't the hunger games hahaha!
LOL... I think there is going to be more punishment than just going to buy some drinks, girls. Watch out, I'm telling you... You better win hehe.
... Don't you think the girls are getting a little overconfident? LOL... Oh, and LOL, nice use of powerpoint. It actually looks good.
/face palm/ What are the boys doing? They are soo stupid, seriously T_T it makes me cry. And good idea, Hyunsoo - make them think you were just eating hehe.
YAAAAY! 2SOO moments! hehe! The way Minhwa and Myungsoo just sat on Hyunsoo's bed LOL. Makes me laugh. And the way Myungsoo just ignores Hyunsoo LOL!
Awww, Minhwa is soo sweet with the sweets. AND OMG, THEY FOUND OUT ABOUT THE POSITIONS THINGY!!! DAAAAAMN. WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT??


P.S: Like I said before... My caps - I don't know why I use them, I just do LOL.