CHARACTERS · SEVENTEEN's Wonwoo (centric), Mingyu, Seungcheol, Jeonghan

STATUS · Ongoing

DESCRIPTION· Wonwoo's not looking for love, but it follows him in the form of a tall, uncoordinated and struggling student named Kim Mingyu. Mingyu is an entity on his own, with his silver hair, questionable humour, and a tendency to break things and the people around him. Wonwoo can't stand him.

He's not looking for love, really, but it finds him anyway.

FOREWORD
The foreword is used to give us a more general intake on the story. I do like the second part of the foreword very much! There's again a dialogue from the story present.. Although, I didn't encounter that one in the chapters yet.. so I'm very excited to read on! I wouldn't have done it otherwise

TAGS
The tags that you have used describe all characters present in the story. That's a good start, but maybe add like fluff romance and such as well to your tags. You know that the tags are used as search criteria if someone wants to read a particular genre, your story will be present and visible as well. Your story definitely deserves it!

Also the overall appearance is very neat and that's good. No need to have a chaos in the overall look of your story. It does give you a relaxed feeling. Well done!

DISPLAY
The font that you have used is large enough to read your story without getting a headache, you kept it very simple and uncomplicated. That's sometimes the best way to display your story.

MAIN CHARACTERS
Seungcheol
Also known as S.Coups, leader of Seventeen. He is like this sweet clumsy guy, who's head over heals in love with the fairytale guy Jeonghan. He does drag everyone with him not to be alone with the love of his live as stupid things are bound to happen. This can be sometimes so bad, that it annoys his best friend/Roommate Wonwoo. He attends the same his friend Wonwoo. He is a law major such as his crush. As for now, there are no major changes yet. So he stays very consistent. But again, we only have 5 chapters so.. a lot can happen as we continue your story. I'm counting on it! He is so funny, that you already can predict that things will go sideways (but the good kind of sideways).

Wonwoo
Is the most down-to-earth one of all. He's not into all the lovey dovey stuff. Unfortunately he's been victimized by one of his only friends/roommate to become the wingman and to be dragged around whenever it suits Seungcheol. He's the straight A student, with few or no friends. He is the socially awkward one. He doesn't' know how to be behave when this super cute guy starts to give him compliments. Again, we are not that far yet in the story, but with this guy, you can see little changes in his character and behaviour yet. He is still very hesitant towards lovey dovey stuff, but maybe someone or someone can change that. He is actually the center of the story. But for now he does play a side role next to Seungcheol.

SIDE CHARACTERS
Jeonghan
With his mesmerising fairytale look, he's able to woo the crowd very easily and attract a lot of attention. He's the major crush and love of Seungcheol. We already get a sneak peek of his character as this is not yet developed to his fullest. One of the reasons is that we are still in the beginning of the story. And your main focus is on Wonwoo and partially on Seungcheol as well. I do think Jeonghan can be this very sweet caring guy who actually secretly loves the clumsy Seungcheol and the attention he gets. We also know that apparently he is also majoring in Law School, this is because we already had one particular scene in the library where he and Seungcheol and Wonwoo are studying. As Wonwo is majoring in another course than Lawsuit, it's Jeonghan and Seungcheol who are enjoying the study session the most. So for now, I'm going to leave it at that. I'm very anticipating to get to know more about him. He is rather consistent for now, no major changes yet.

Soonyoung
He is friends with both Seungcheol and Wonwoo. He's also the one as we read on, who keeps both of them together. He knows them both and knows what's going on their lives. He's a dance major, so completely different from his friends. He seems to me a very bubbly and a very bright personality.

Mingyu
He's the mysterious friend of Jeonghan. He is a very vivid person with a very bubbly and bright personality such as Soonyoung. He doesn't care what anybody thinks about him. He is super cute and super sweet. As he only entered the story recently, we don't know that much about him yet. Only that he managed to knock Wonwoo of his sockets and catch him off guard.

I do hope we will get to see more about all characters. Again, we are still in the beginning of the story, so a lot can happening between now and then. FIGHTING, you're doing a great job so far!

Looking at your stats, you see that your story has a lot of potential and is on its way to get very popular. I do regret that you don't have more readers subscribing to your story. You have a lot more views than subs. It would be great if they also support you by giving you a "vote" (as in subscribing to your story) I wouldn't change anything, just go for it and you will get there. That's also something that all the commenters are thinking about when leaving you a comment with their thoughts. I do like all the support you get from us as readers. And by the looks of your comment, you also take your time to properly answer them. You are very quick in responding. I left also a comment on your story and only a few minutes later you already replied to me. Again, don't give up and go for it! This story is so adorable and too cute not be featured once! FIGHTING!