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title: 4/5
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It doesn't exactly attract people's attention, but it relates to the story ^_^
foreword and description: 8/10
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Its great. But I have to cut some marks for some mistakes, for 'Jonghyun's mother' you put 'Jonghyuns mother'
appearance: 2/5
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The font is easy to read, but you should you use a poster for the main image.
plot: 12/15
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There's a lot of stories with forced marriage but your story is unique.
originality: 8/15
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grammar and spelling: 17/20
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Great job. But you put 'Oh and Kang Sun call me when you decided' instead of 'Oh and Kang Sun, remember to call me when you've decided.', you put 'stripped me of my clothes' when it was supposed to be 'stripped me out of my clothes' or 'stripped me off my clothes'
flow: 10/10
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It flowed pretty well.
characterization: 10/10
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Nothing to say :)
overall enjoyment: 10/10
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I enjoyed it very much
total: 81/100
reviewer: babycorn
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