Title : 5/5

This title is quite unique. I like it :D

Foreword and Description : 7/10

You're foreword and Description is not well described. Like until... What happens?

Appearance : 3/5

You're writing style is pretty hard to understand.. And It was pretty hard to understand how you set it up...

Plot : 2/15

So basically I have no idea what's going on... Like, Something happens... But I don't really get the plot here....

Originality : 10/15

This was very original, like I've never seen this like any other stories out there.

Grammar and Spelling : 2/20

I was going insane.. I'm really strict towards this and to me, Please work on grammar. I know English might not be your first language but I'm really honest. 

Flow : 3/10

I think it was pretty rushed... I mean, Take time to explain what happens. Who was Soora? What was her relationship with Sehun and Kris?

Characterization : 2/10 

The characters weren't explained enough. I know how Sehun and Kris are but how are Ines and Soora like? Are they friendly?, mean?, caring? tell me.

Overall Enjoyment : 8/10

Although I couldn't say much about it. I enjoyed it So much :D

Total :42/100

Reviewer's Notes: I'm so sorry if I seemed like bashing on this... I'm super strict when it comes to reviews. Super sorry. -bows 1234364564424 times- 

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E.G.'s notes!

hi! i'm E.G.! i'm here to remind you of crediting the shop and the reviewer. i'll keep an eye on your stories! /mehrong

thanks for requesting! :)