★— greasyinspirit
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title: 5/5
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The title is great. It makes the reader want to know more about the story.
foreword and description: 8/10
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It was great, however, I don't think you should include so much about the story in the foreword, trying to get into the accident, then meeting Kim Myungsoo. But overall its really interesting!
appearance: 5/5
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Gosh, the poster, its gaahhh. Using 'Times New Roman' was a great choice for this story.
plot: 12/15
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It feels great, but a little confusing at first. 'nuff said.
originality: 13/15
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I've read one story with the same plot as this, but the way you wrote it, it was so unique.
grammar and spelling: 20/20
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I couldn't find a single spelling or grammar mistake. Pardon me if I see it wrongly.
flow: 8/10
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It flowed pretty well, but for the part 'very well then, you two would have a chance to live again.' I don't think He should have said it so easily, I think that there should be some argument inside of it before He agrees.
characterization: 10/10
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I love their characteristics.
overall enjoyment: 10/10
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I enjoyed it very much. With less spelling or grammar mistakes, its really easy to read. Especially with the soothing music. (FYI, I subscribed to it too. Update soon. I'm a silent reader lololol)
total: 91/100
reviewer: babycorn
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