Title : 5/5
The title is fine, it matches well the story.

Foreword/Description : 10/10
No complains about it, it's good.

Appearance : 5/5
I love the poster, it's really nice. The charaters description is also good (synthetic but well made). I always appreciate when people do add photos of the OC.

Plot : 12/15
The plot is good. The theme of the chat-boyfriend is a common one but for the moment you're developing it in a funny and interesting way. I really enjoyed the story so far.

Originality : 10/15
Well you've chosen a not so original theme

Grammar : 20/20
The grammar is good. I saw that you update late at night and the revise the chapters:)

Characterization : 9/10
The charcters are well described and for the moment they seem to match the description you gave in the foreward.

Flow : 10/10
The flow is good, not too fast and not too slow.

Overall Enjoyment : 9/10
I really enjoyed reading your story :D ahaha maybe because I always thought about it “what if my fav idols were chatting on-line?”. So i'm looking forward to your future updates cause i really want to know what's going to happend!:D

Total : 90/100

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