★— SoaringCliche
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title: 5/5
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I freaking loved it. It fit the story and 'errthang.
foreword and description: 8/10
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You definitely improved from the last story I reviewed for you. There were several mistakes in your foreword/preview though.
The word, following, should be followed.
You should also write the word, always, before seemed.
O: I seemed to always be following him.
S: I always seemed to be following him.
See how it's easier for readers to read?
appearance: 5/5
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plot: 13/15
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It isn't overused, yet it's not new to the fanfiction world.
originality: 13/15
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You always seem to tweek stories to fit your style. I give props to that and I can see the creativity.
grammar and spelling: 18/20
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Nothing major, but I'd occasionally see a random and unnecessary comma.
Oh, and you'd use the wrong verb tense very rarely.
flow: 8/10
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Seemed to be at the right flow. I'm just so glad that you didn't rush through the story in 3 chapters and made Kikwang fall in love with Yoseob right away.
characterization: 9/10
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There were some characters that I questioned about but just shrugged off.
overall enjoyment: 8/10
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total: 87/100
reviewer: channicki
reviewer's note:
Sorry if I took long to review. Been busy >_<
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