Bringing  Back  Your  Smile   

                           by ChibiMusicStar   

Title: 3/5

well your title is quite cliché. 

Appearance: 5/5

I like the poster it match the story but the IU picture should change.

Foreword/Description: 6/10

Your description is okay but when I read first chapter I can't understand somehow.

Plot: 13/15

Your plot was somehow of okay. But can be improved.

Originality: 5/15

This type of story I have read before though so ... I give lesser marks.

Grammar/Spelling: 18/20

Quite okay but you should see other people story and improve. 

Characterization: 2/10

Nothing to say..I was quite blur at it though.

Flow: 4/10

At starting was okay but at the chap 2 or 3 is too fast. 

Overall Enjoyment: 10/10

I am happy when I see IU is the main lead though

Total: 66/100

RilaCinaXy's Note: Well done anyway:) thanks for requesting. 

review by RilaCinaXy