★— kamikazexox
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title: 2/5
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foreword and description: 5/10
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It told too much. The character charts revealed much more than it should about the characters. It was all very cliche.
appearance: 4/5
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Your poster fit very well. But with all the other pics and posters, it didn't go very well.
plot: 10/15
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As I said, very cliche. There's always the "popular guys" and then the girl no one would expect to capture one of their hearts.
originality: 11/15
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grammar and spelling: 17/20
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There were quite a few mistakes.
In some of your chapter, you started a sentence with the font Georgia. I thought that at first it was a mistake, but many of the chapters have it. I suggest you don't do that.
In some of your chapter, you started a sentence with the font Georgia. I thought that at first it was a mistake, but many of the chapters have it. I suggest you don't do that.
flow: 4/10
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I was reading and then all the sudden, bam, JiYeon and Key were kissing. He was developing feelings much too quickly. It makes the reader think "Oh, did I miss something here?" I think you just needed to let their relationship grow a little more. :)
Especially with MinHo. At first, I thought he merely past her by as another girl who likes him, but then all the sudden he really cared about her and what Key does.
characterization: 9/10
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The characterization was exactly like you said in your character chart, so I guess you don't need one after all haha.
overall enjoyment: 9/10
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Usually, I wouldn't have read something like this, but I really like it so far! Very well played out. ^^
total: 71/100
reviewer: rlab_exotic
reviewer's note: Sorry this is so late!Anyways, I really look foreword to the rest of your story!^^
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