Our Not-So-Perfect Love Story.

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(There will be a few POV's in this story. Jin Sae's POV, Luhan's POV, Minho's POV and Narrator's POV)

Attending a new university is definitely not a joke, especially when you’re forced to. Meet Han Jin Sae, your average teenage girl who just turned twenty-one. The question is,
Is she really average?

She’s known for her music skills back in her village but she’s known to be nothing in Seoul. The thing they don’t know about her is that she's the daughter of Han Jae Jung. The owner of Han Records that was well-known for recruiting potential singers. Once you’re signed under Han Records, you’ll go very far. She also has talent for playing the piano, singing and acting. When she first came to the university, everyone didn’t acknowledge her presence until they noticed her talents. Along the way, two guys popped out of nowhere.

A total sweetheart, and a big jerk face. It’s like you could definitely see the contrast between the two guys. There’s only one thing they have in common.

They   b o t h  fell in love with her.


[ S n e a k    P r e v i e w ]
N a r r a t o r

"Who is he? An ex?" Luhan asked before she mumbled a soft "Yeah, so what?" before she crossed her arms on the table to sleep again but this time Luhan wouldn't let her. He poked her arm and she lifted her head to look at him. "What do you want now?" she asked but he smirked. "Entertain me." he said as she leaned away and uncrossed her arms before she rested her back on the chair. "I'm not your entertainer. Go find your own source of entertainment." she snapped back at him but he could only smile. "Yeah, I found it."

"And what is it?" Luhan used his finger to point it around the room before he landed it her direction. "It's you."

"You're crazy."

"Says you."

"You two may leave now." Mrs.Jin spoke up but when she lifted her chin up, she could only see the two sleeping on the table. Jin Sae was sleeping with her head on one arm, facing Luhan. Luhan was doing the exact same thing as though he was a mirror. "Stupid young sweet couple." Mrs.Jin cursed softly before she got up from her seat. "YAH! WAKE UP!" she shouted and the two jerked up immediately after hearing her voice. "The two of you can leave. Get out." she said as she left the keys on the table. "Lock up on your way out and leave the keys on my table." she said as she left the room.

She stretched her arms before she let out soft sounds because she was stretching and Luhan was just trying to open his eyes. They were asleep for two hours and they felt like sleeping even more but they knew they had to get out of the room. She stood up and slung her bag over her shoulder. She dragged herself towards the table and grabbed the keys. Luhan was following behind her with a bag over his shoulder when he accidentally tripped on the leg of the table. She turned around to ask him who was going to lock up when she couldn't because she felt lips on hers. She opened her eyes only to realize Luhan's lips were on hers.


 

Characters.

Major Characters.


 

Name : Han Jin Sae / J.S. (You/OC)
Age : Twenty-One.

 Used to work part time at her friend’s café.
 The daughter of Han Jae Jang, owner of Han Records.
 Attending Seoul National University.
 Friends with her group of guy friends from her hometown/village, who they call themselves EXO-K.

"If you're going to be nice, be nice. If you're going to show me your fake side and be a complete two-face behind my back, I'd rather see that instead of your nice side."


 


 

 

Name : Luhan. (The Jerk Face)
Age Twenty-One.

 Part of EXO-M, a group signed under Han Records.
 Blunt and rude at first, but when you get to know him he's not that bad.
 Attending Seoul National University.
 Friends with the members of his group, EXO-M.

"When I'm rude, I'm rude. When I'm blunt, I'm just being honest. When I tell you the truth, believe it. When I say I love you, I'd want you to say it too."


 



 

Name : Choi Minho. (The Sweetheart)
Age Twenty-One.

 Part of SHINee, a group signed under Han Records.
 A total sweetheart known for sweeping girls off their feet with his smile and actions.
 Attending Seoul National University.
 Friends with the members of his group, SHINee.

"I don't expect much from you apart from your love. I hope to be the reason why you're smiling."

 
 
 

 

Name Oh Sehun. (The Best Friend / Sehun)
Age Twenty-One.

 Part of EXO-K, a group of Jin Sae's friends who call themselves that.
 Has been like Jin Sae's friend since her friends, Yunho and Changmin left to be trainees.
 Usually mistaken to be Jin Sae's boyfriend but they're just close friends.

"Boyfriend and girlfriends come and go. But best friends remain forever."

 
 

 
 
 

Minor Characters. (Groups)


 
EXO-K
 
Names from left to right :-
 
Byun Baekhyun (Baekhyun)
Do Kyungsoo (Kyungsoo)
Park Chanyeol (Chanyeol)
Oh Sehun (Sehun)
Kim Joonmyun (Suho)
Kim Jongin (Kai)
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 

(Signed under Han Records) EXO-M

Names from left to right :-
 
Zhang Yixing (Lay)
Kim Jong Dae (Chen)
Kris Wu Yi Fan (Kris)
Luhan
Kim Min Seok (Xiumin)
Huang Zi Tao (Tao)
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 

 

SHINee (Signed under Han Records)

Names from left to right :-
 
Lee Jinki (Onew)
Lee Taemin (Taemin)
Kim Jonghyun (Jonghyun)
Choi Minho (Minho)
Kim Kibum (Key)
 
 
 
 
 
 

 

 
 
 
(Not signed) 2NE1
 
Names from left to right :-
 
Sandara Park (Dara)
Gong Minji (Minzy)
Lee Chaerin (Chaerin/CL)
Park Bom (Bom/Bommie)
 
 

 
 
 

 

 

 

 

TVXQ (Signed under Han Records)
 
Names:-
On the left : Shim Changmin (Changmin / Max)
On the right : Jung Yunho (Yunho / U-Know)
 
 
 
 
 
 

 



Playlist :-
How To Love - Lil Wayne 

Closer - Kim Taeyeon (SNSD)  
Still Into You - Paramore 
Hiding My Heart - Adele 
The Only Exception - Paramore 
 


Original OST.
Title : Love On Top.
Lyrics by MissyQ.
(-this is just something like a title track but just the lyrics. no audio
-the chorus was taken from Beyonce's Love On Top but the rest of the lyrics are original)

The first thing I do when I wake up in the morning,
Is let my mind wander into the thoughts of you,
I don't know who I am when I'm doing it,
But trust me girl I know I'm not faking it.

These feelings in me are just strong and true,
Cause you're stuck on me just like a tattoo,
No amount of doubt can ever change my mind,
I know what I'm saying when I say that you're mine.

During the day I'd let you have your way,
But when the night falls I'll have my own say,
I'll tell you all the sweet things to show what I mean,
But no amount of clarity could ever let you see.

That this is love,
You're the one I love,
You're the one I need,
You're the only one I see.

Cause this is love,
He's the one that gives his all,
He's the one I can always call,
When everything stops, finally he puts our love on top.

Who knew it would be right from the beginning,
That I would be in love with this boy I'm seeing,
Who could ever deny those dazing eyes,
Two pair of whirlpools just changing lives.

He's the one that puts the beat in my heart,
He's the one that you couldn't ever tell apart,
Whether if he's jealous, whether if he's nice,
Doing one or two things to make you think twice.

But all in all this is all I have to say,
I'll never regret meeting him on that first day,
One little bump was all it took,
To set our hearts flying just like in the storybooks.

 

Foreword

Author's note: I love reading comments and it would only take a minute for you to write one so,
do comment!
I read them all :3

P.S. : Subscribe only if you'll stick by me.
Because it kinda, 'hurts' when I see the number drop.
Really, it does. I don't know if that made sense but
okay.

P.S.S. : An explanation from my oneshot, "Our Love Story" that was previously named "Our Not-So-Perfect Love Story" that is now the title for this story. Like I mentioned, from that oneshot (Our Love Story) will not be the same as this story. But, certain scenes (in the flashbacks) will appear in this story.


A story featuring Luhan, Minho and you.


Any form of plagiarism is not allowed.
Respect me as an author and do not plagiarize. Please. Just don't.
Copyright  © 2013 MissyQ
All rights reserved.


 

Once again, I hope you enjoy reading ! ^^


This story was used as an entry for A Thousand Fictions; Writing Contest!

Click on the contest title to join! :) <3


 

 

MissyQ
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daebak-asdfghjkl
#1
Chapter 53: This story is really beautifulll!!! Thankyou for making this great story!!:))
koreankimchibaby #2
Chapter 53: Chapter 51: OMAYGAWD...this is sooo beautiful...soooo beautiful..the person who doesnt like this is NOT human, i reapeat, NOT HUMAN!!! You cant possibly dislike this fic?!?! Well, if u do, ur the most ed up human being in the universe...I JUST LOVE LUHANXOC fics!!!! yehet!!! kekekeke...love ya author nim! see u soon!
Emmery #3
I sincerely hope this gets featured! I loved it :)
cessyness
#4
Chapter 53: Sehun please!!! Though Im late. -.-
cessyness
#5
Chapter 52: Awwwwwww...... they're living together! Im just wondering though, I just notice that it was inevitable to them to live in together.
cessyness
#6
Chapter 49: Sehunnie!!!!!! ♥ aww. I hope you made Luhan jealous of Sehun more since he was busy and Sehun became a producer!
cessyness
#7
Chapter 48: Awwwwwwww.... sweet! ♥
cessyness
#8
Chapter 44: Awwwwwwwww...... :")
cessyness
#9
Chapter 43: The perkss of being a celebrity. -__-
cessyness
#10
Chapter 42: Awwwww... andwae!!!!! T.T