Chapter 57

When a nerd transforms to a kingka

"There. Perfect." Myungsoo mumbled as he fixed the candle lights.

"I hope Jiyeon would like this." 

Myungsoo grabbed his phone and started calling you.

Unfortunately, you left your phone on your bed. 

"Why isn't she answering? Is she mad because I wasn't answering her calls?" Myungsoo pouted.

Myungsoo sent a text message to you instead.

Meanwhile...

*Where is Myungsoo oppa?* 

Those words kept on replaying in your head. You went to your room to take a nap. You heard your phone beep, so you grabbed your phone and opened the message.

"Meet me at ~~~~~. I'll wait for you. I'll explain everything when you get here. I love you!"

From: Myungsoo oppa <3

"Finally." A big grin spread on your face. You immediately got up from your bed and went to the place where Myungsoo is. *I wonder what Myungsoo oppa is planning...*

~~~

*Why is she taking so long?* Myungsoo thought.

After a couple of minutes, he heard the door open. He immediately stood up from his seat and greeted you.

“HAPPY BIRTHDAY, MY ONE AND ONLY LOVE!” Myungsoo attacked you with a hug.

“Thanks o-oppa. I can’t bre-breathe.”

“Oh, sorry. I've just missed you.” With that, he pulled away.

“Now explain. I really thought that you forgot my birthday.”

“How can I forget it?! I’m sorry. I was preparing all of these…”

You looked at the place, and indeed, It was beautiful. There were candles everywhere, there was a table with two seats, and you can see the city lights from afar.

*So beautiful.* You thought.

“Thank you so much, Myungsoo oppa.”

“C’mon. Let’s eat.”

He led you to the table. Soon, a music played and the food was served.

*How romantic.* You smiled.

The two of you started eating.

“There’s still so many things that I want to show you. Guess what?”

“What?”

“After this, we’ll go to Lotte World!”

“Really?!” Your eyes widened.

“Yup.”

“Woah. It’s been ages since I last went there.”

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-2Mirae-
14 streak #1
Chapter 80: I noticed I bookmarked your story so I decided to reread your story from the beginning. The ending and the reuniting is so cute!!!
Shihsuan2005 #2
Chapter 80: I agree with teddy2005 I love this story so much so please continue the story
teddy2005 #3
Chapter 80: I love this story very much and I wish you will write a story to continue this story
Rini6189
#4
Chapter 80: It's nice for the whole family to reunite after all those years that they'd been apart. At least their father had come to his senses to finally learn to accept them as they are. Forgiveness leads one to make peace with the pain.

That's ending the story on a good note with the scene of Myungsoo, Jiyeon and the guys having a good time on the beach. He and Jiyeon are funny together in the way that they goof off. They make such a cute couple.

No problem! I'm glad that you appreciate the help I'd given you with the corrections. It's good that you've learned something that'd help you in becoming a better writer. Experimenting with different styles and formats is part of the writing process in developing your skill. Everyone needs to start somewhere on a path of self-discovery in order to grow and learn more about themselves.
Rini6189
#5
Chapter 79: This is one sugary sweet and heartwarmingly fluffy chapter of Myungsoo and Jiyeon drowning in love. It's cute that he's widely grinning while pretending to be unconscious as she confessed her love to him. He's quite mischievous to put on that act just to get that out of her.
TIffany_93 #6
Chapter 12: I love this story so much. The whole story line is so sweet. :)
maoaher #7
Chapter 80: Dang I was up at 2 am reading this and forced myself to sleep. I didn't want to get away reading this fabric. It was so sweet, I'm getting attacked my bugs lol. Thank you authornim for this cute, cheesy story
AngelNic #8
Love this story
taoftsehun #9
i love this story I'm rereading
_Taemi_
#10
i really enjoyed this story authornim