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A Mischievous Marriage
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Chapter six: Our game 

♘Jaejoong’s P.O.V

I still feel slightly weird from yesterday’s hangover. I check out of the hotel and decide to drive back home. I wonder how that got home last night, it was raining heavily wasn’t it? Not that I really care. By around 10:00AM in the morning, I arrive home only to see appa’s eyes literally shooting lava at me. Umma is too. They’re both wordless however it looks like they’re boiling from eating too much chilli. Anyway, I feel so tired and sleepy, so I decide to make my way up to my comfortable room upstairs.

‘Yah. Kim Jaejoong. Don’t you dare move an inch.’

‘The ?’

‘Don’t use that language in front of your parents.’ My father adds in.

‘Alright, well I’m sleepy and tired and I feel that I need a rest because last night was too tiring.’

‘What did you do last night?’ Likewise, I'm not retarded enough to tell my parents about my own private life, thank you very much.‘Oh my god, it’s none of your business.’ I say, but he's fuming.‘You dare speak to me like that?’

‘For ’s sake, Can I just go to sleep?’

‘No, not until you explain what happened to Miss Ahn Sun Hee. I thought you two were really close to each other, the Ahn household only contacted me an hour ago that Sun Hee has not yet returned home from last night.’

‘How am I supposed to know what happened to her? I don’t care anyway.’

‘You took her out yesterday, and from then on she never came home. What do you mean you don’t care? Aren’t you going to marry her?’

‘Eew no. Aish, she probably just went to sleep at some guy’s home. Kay bye I’m sleeping.’

‘YAH KIM JAEJOONG!’ Wow, it's another person who has cracked it with anger. 

Oh my god, shut the hell up! It’s not like she’s kidnapped or dead or… I don’t know. . If I don’t find her then I’m going to be in trouble, I mean I, ME, KIM JAEJOONG. I make my way back down to the stairs and walk out the door.

So god damn sleepy, AISH, stupid Ahn Ka Eun/Yoon Ka Eun/Ahn Sun Hee or whatever her ing name is. I arrive at the shopping centre we went to yesterday. More like, outside the shopping centre since that’s where I ditched her. I drive around the boundaries, seeing no signs of a girl with a preppy styled pair of clothes. I can’t believe I’m wasting my time looking for her, but if I don’t I’ll be murdered. I need some help.

I park my car just on the side of the street and call my most trusted mate, Yoochun.‘Yeobosayo?’

‘Yeobosayo, Yoochun-ah I need some help here.’

‘Yeah what is it?’

‘Dude, so like do you know the Doota mall?’

‘Yeah of course, who doesn’t? Plus I went there yesterday.’

‘Oh, you did? Perfect. So hear me out.’

‘Sure bro.’

‘Kay, so like some random who I wanted to make fun of by marrying her went there with me yesterday. We were going to purchase wedding rings, however she slapped me on the friggin face and I ing lost my man pride so I got pissed. So I decided to forget about her and leave, anyway just asking a favour from you here.’

‘Yeah, what is it?’

‘Since you were here yesterday while we all went clubbing, did you see a girl in preppy-styled clothes? Oh and yeah, she’s not that pretty.’

‘I saw one, however she is pretty, so I guess we’re not talking about the same person hyung.’

‘Who knows, so where did you see her? When was the last time you saw her?’

‘Ah, I randomly found her in my personal reserve.’

‘Haha.. you  mean the park your Park family owns?’ I mentally face palm myself, that was really bad, and if lameness was measured in scales, and I were to measure the lameness of what I just said...it would be Ahn Ka Eun.‘I see what you did there. So yeah, she was like unconscious.’

Man, what happened to this girl last night? Yoochun found her lying in his personal reserve unconscious last night?

‘Where is she now?’

‘At my house.’

‘Okay, meet you there.’  So she was sleeping at another guy’s house. Thank god Yoochun saved her, otherwise, I’d be in deep .

♙Ka Eun’s P.O.V

The ceiling is a very warm cream colour, with a chandelier high up, dangling down. It looks so peaceful and grand. The pillow is so soft and comf

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sweetdreamerz #1
Chapter 53: How many chapters is the original story actually & how many chapters is the new version do you intend to write? Correct me if I'm wrong. Is it 5 chapters for first update & then all remaining chapters on second updates? Or 5 chapters at first update & after that 1 chapter for each updates till we met the continuation?
It just that I've been desperately waiting to know the answer for all my curiosity. It's been a long painful wait before to finally come to where we are now (well I just found this FF yesterday, so that's wouldn't apply for me). & if you rewrite the story, it would be too painful to wait for the exact moments again before any of the questions being answer. Because I'm dying to know (honestly I do feel like that).
But if you really must do it, even if I fell very reluctant, I'll give you my full support. Because I know it wouldn't be easy & you gonna need supports & loves from all your subbies to keep you strong. So... Go for it (^_^).
MaivxiaKhaab
#2
It will also be nice instead of first POV, make it third POV. I get kind of tired of reading stories it "I and me and mine and my" all day. I think most romance stories these days have a female POV most of the time. AAAAAND, get rid of oppa and other Korean honorifics. I know they are in Korea and all, but do you see real life authors adding honorifics? Even if the author is Asian and lives in an Asian country? If you want, you can add it in...but not too much.
MaivxiaKhaab
#3
Chapter 53: It's good in my opinion that you are going to rewrite this. I don't care about the cliche stuff most fan fiction stories have, LOL. I'm a hopeless romantic *cries*. Hopefully, the rewrite will be better, because once you mature, you start to think better than your teenage self. Hopefully, it will be a bit better this time. I'm excited to see what you got! Even if you decide to quit this story, I will still remember it as this one weird long story that took forever to complete .
fallenangel #4
Chapter 53: I got scared seeing the title of the update but now I'm relieved to see that you "just" wanna rewrite it :D
I will still be there reading your updates!
hwaiting!
mykomik #5
Chapter 49: Pleaseeee updateeee sooooooon
hazel_marie13
#6
Chapter 49: I hate Jaejoong for treating her like he owns her! I pity Ka Eun for falling in love with a kind of guy like him, it must have been better if she falls for a man like Myungsoo! I really like for Myungsoo to make him get jealous more for it may result to Jaejoong realizing he likes her or not and just treat her as someone he owns because she's his wife! Or it will be better for them to divorce so that Jaejoong will realize she let go of a nice girl like Ka Eun but I doubt it since Ka Eun doesn't want to but who knows in the future! Will surely wait for your next update to know what will happen next, update soon :)
mykomik #7
Chapter 49: up date pleaseeeeee
suhashiny
#8
Chapter 49: KIM JAEJOONG STOP TREATING HER LIKE A THING YOU OWN!!!!! Don't you dare do that to her!!!!!
BTW, new reader here :)
Story is AWESOME!!!!!
I really want Myungsoo to make him really really really really jealous....... Is that possible??
fallenangel #9
Chapter 49: I really hope Jae cares for the right reasons and not because he is just being possessive and seeing her as one of his belongings. :) Understand your writer's block but I hope you will find some inspiration again soon :D
MaivxiaKhaab
#10
Chapter 49: No need to be sorry! Writer's block is a sin. I hope you continue to update. I don't like stories that are discontinued because...THERE ARE STILL SO MUCH QUESTIONS THAT NEED TO BE ANSWERED. *cough* Excuse me. Glad that you're back.