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A Mischievous Marriage
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Chapter thirty-seven: Celebrating

Jaejoong basically pushed me into his stupid silver fancy car and ignored me for the whole trip which is actually really rude. I nagged him a thousand times about where we were going and he told me to shut up because I'm distracting his driving. Well, I bet this guy used to recklessly drink drive anyway. 

Now I find myself sitting in a dark room. What the actual , Jaejoong told me to sit and wait on the fancy couches of the room and suddenly the lights all disappeared and it's been like that for twenty minutes now, everything is just so dodgy. Lucky I still have my phone with me so I can text spam Jaejoong for being a completely rude as or play flappy bird or some . Actually, I have already sent him around twenty messages which basically consists of, 'what the hell are you doing', 'I hate you', 'you're a ','prepare to die.' 

He hasn't replied to one so it's pointless now and I'm just going to curl up on the corner of the couch in pitch black. I really feel like crying, who the hell dumps someone in the dark for like twenty five minutes, is he abandoning me? I begin to get teary and at this moment the door creaks open, an object being pushed by a trolley illuminates the room with it's dim candle lights... twenty one candle lights. Omo, it's a cake!

Under the dim light, the five people start to sing me happy birthday in the nicest way possibly, it's as if they're harmonising. So, this is what a birthday feels like?... I have never celebrated it before and after being dumped here for period of time in the darkness, I really think it was worth it. My heart is fluttering and I just feel so touched. 

"Make a wish!" They yell in unison. I wish for... me to get along well with everyone and everyone shall be happy with each other! For some reason as I make this wish, Jaejoong comes to mind but maybe it's because he's in front of me. I blow the candles, holy cheesus it is so hard to blow them out so I put a bit more engery into it. 

"Ew," Jaejoong yelps, "don't spit on the cake!"
"I'm not even!" I say, blowing out the last candle, they all clap as confetti falls down on me as well as their stupid streamers and birthday whistles. Let's not forget the stupid party hats they're wearing. "Yay, Ka Eun is now twenty one!" I feel so extremely touched, I can not hold these feels any longer. I place both hands on top of my mouth and start crying, whilst frantically trying to hide my face and wipe my tears at the same time, I must look stupid don't I, well I feel stupid too.

"What the hell Junsu! You made her cry!" Everyone says, targetting Junsu. 

"What? Anniya! Stop blaming everything on me and bullying me!" He protests. I laugh at how innocent Junsu looks but I'm still crying so just imagine how ridiculous I actually look. "You must've left her in the dark for too long." Yoochun suggests. Jaejoong sighs and positions himself to the same level as me. "Oh about that, the cake took a while to prepare because the candles took a long time to light up and of course, we had to try and put on these party hats as stylish as possible and-" 

"Gomawo, really, thank you all so much." I say, hiccuping through my happy tears. Or you could say, sad as well, because even if I knew my birthday back then, I would have no one to celebrate it with so I'm just so overwhelmed. Jaejoong gives me a hug, "Yeah, yeah, I know we're great people but stop crying you're meant to be happy okay?" He says, the top of my head. He pulls away but keeps his hands settled on the sides of my arms. I nod, "I'm actually really touched, I am happy!" I yelp. He chuckles, "Wanna birthday kiss?" 

I look at the rest of the people and they seem to be turning away awkwardly, Changmin even coughs. "Um, no thanks." I reply, but the moment Jaejoong pulls away further, part of me regrets that decision. 

"Yeah so like, this is a karaoke room, it's okay we have six microphones." Jaejoong exclaims. "Is Ka Eun good at singing?" Junsu innocently asks. Oh my god, of course I can't sing, this is going to look bad. No one replies but Jaejoong just laughs his head off, it seems as though they all understand the message... 

"By the way, why did we bring the cake out so early, I mean we haven't had dinner." Changmin asks, I can tell this person is extremely logical. "I think Jaejoong wanted the happy birthday scene to surprise his wife first but probably didn't think about anything else." Yunho adds.

"Can I steal the spot light for a second, but Jaejoong didn't even plan anything, he just chose the location." Yoochun says. Yeah alright, that's not even new information. 

"Yah, aish, you! Stop making me look bad! She never told me her birthday, I don't know how you found out... but if I knew I really would plan this too, so you." He says, defending himself. 

"Stop swearing and using unsophisticated language." Changmin butts in. "Yeah, I'm just going to stop here because I know if I get into an argument with you I can't win." Jaejoong dejectedly says. I can only laugh at their cute friendship. 

"Thank you all for preparing, Yoochun, Changmin-ssi, Yunho-ssi, Junsu-ssi." I say, bowing. "Um, Ka Eun, you're missing someone?" Jaejoong says, clearly talking about himself.

"Well, I did kinda thank you before..."
"No! You said thank you all! Now you're saying names individually and I'm not included? What is this?"

Changmin pushes him away onto a couch, "Shut up, it's our time to shine." 

"Yeah, why doesn't Yoochun have a ssi, why are you so formal to us?" Yunho asks. We

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sweetdreamerz #1
Chapter 53: How many chapters is the original story actually & how many chapters is the new version do you intend to write? Correct me if I'm wrong. Is it 5 chapters for first update & then all remaining chapters on second updates? Or 5 chapters at first update & after that 1 chapter for each updates till we met the continuation?
It just that I've been desperately waiting to know the answer for all my curiosity. It's been a long painful wait before to finally come to where we are now (well I just found this FF yesterday, so that's wouldn't apply for me). & if you rewrite the story, it would be too painful to wait for the exact moments again before any of the questions being answer. Because I'm dying to know (honestly I do feel like that).
But if you really must do it, even if I fell very reluctant, I'll give you my full support. Because I know it wouldn't be easy & you gonna need supports & loves from all your subbies to keep you strong. So... Go for it (^_^).
MaivxiaKhaab
#2
It will also be nice instead of first POV, make it third POV. I get kind of tired of reading stories it "I and me and mine and my" all day. I think most romance stories these days have a female POV most of the time. AAAAAND, get rid of oppa and other Korean honorifics. I know they are in Korea and all, but do you see real life authors adding honorifics? Even if the author is Asian and lives in an Asian country? If you want, you can add it in...but not too much.
MaivxiaKhaab
#3
Chapter 53: It's good in my opinion that you are going to rewrite this. I don't care about the cliche stuff most fan fiction stories have, LOL. I'm a hopeless romantic *cries*. Hopefully, the rewrite will be better, because once you mature, you start to think better than your teenage self. Hopefully, it will be a bit better this time. I'm excited to see what you got! Even if you decide to quit this story, I will still remember it as this one weird long story that took forever to complete .
fallenangel #4
Chapter 53: I got scared seeing the title of the update but now I'm relieved to see that you "just" wanna rewrite it :D
I will still be there reading your updates!
hwaiting!
mykomik #5
Chapter 49: Pleaseeee updateeee sooooooon
hazel_marie13
#6
Chapter 49: I hate Jaejoong for treating her like he owns her! I pity Ka Eun for falling in love with a kind of guy like him, it must have been better if she falls for a man like Myungsoo! I really like for Myungsoo to make him get jealous more for it may result to Jaejoong realizing he likes her or not and just treat her as someone he owns because she's his wife! Or it will be better for them to divorce so that Jaejoong will realize she let go of a nice girl like Ka Eun but I doubt it since Ka Eun doesn't want to but who knows in the future! Will surely wait for your next update to know what will happen next, update soon :)
mykomik #7
Chapter 49: up date pleaseeeeee
suhashiny
#8
Chapter 49: KIM JAEJOONG STOP TREATING HER LIKE A THING YOU OWN!!!!! Don't you dare do that to her!!!!!
BTW, new reader here :)
Story is AWESOME!!!!!
I really want Myungsoo to make him really really really really jealous....... Is that possible??
fallenangel #9
Chapter 49: I really hope Jae cares for the right reasons and not because he is just being possessive and seeing her as one of his belongings. :) Understand your writer's block but I hope you will find some inspiration again soon :D
MaivxiaKhaab
#10
Chapter 49: No need to be sorry! Writer's block is a sin. I hope you continue to update. I don't like stories that are discontinued because...THERE ARE STILL SO MUCH QUESTIONS THAT NEED TO BE ANSWERED. *cough* Excuse me. Glad that you're back.