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A Mischievous Marriage
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Chapter thirteen: Last day in Japan 

“So… on the first day we did nothing. On the second day we went to Disneyland, on the third day we went to the hot springs and relaxed, yesterday we played in the snow and went shopping as well as eating Japanese street foods, well today concludes our honeymoon in Japan, and since I’ve been deciding everything for the past few days, today you’ll get the privilege to decide. Our plane is at midnight, so we’ll have time for dinner too.”

I place my index finger under my chin, deciding on some good places to go. I’ve heard that there are many places in Japan where people write wishes on a mini board and hang it somewhere special. They say that there’s a fountain around here too… apparently many wishes come true.

“Can we go somewhere peaceful and write wishes down?” I ask. Jaejoong steps back and looks at me with confusion.

“And you call that fun? Why can’t we go eat some more food or like go some-”

“Shut up, I said you get the privilege to decide.”

“Kay.” I reply, stealing his favourite blunt word. 

“Don’t kay me.”

“This isn’t text, who cares.”

“Just kill yourself please.” I say, which is rather rude. “You bi- OIII why are you being so mean to me? We said we’ll be nice to each other.”

“I’m glad today is the last day.”

“So am I. I’m actually suffering so badly.”

“Just go get changed.”

“Kay.”

“You-”

“Hmmm? Continue your sentence please, or do you have nothing to say?” 

“Oh my gosh!” I yell in frustration, I guess it’s been way too long since we’ve had an argument, and when we get back to Korea… things aren’t going to look very pretty.

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“Oh wow Ka Eun, this place is actually really, really nice. I mean, it’s a quite large area with so many trees and wishes hung onto them.”

“I know, it’s so amazing, that’s why you should listen to me more often.”

“No thanks.”

“Well same goes to you, I don’t like listening to you either.”

“Alright then… I know this place looks good but why did you have to choose to come here? There’s like heaps of these in Korea, it’s nothing special.”

“People say lot's of wishes come true here.”

“You believe that?”

“Yes.” It's better to believe in wishes than to not. “HAHAHAHAHAHAAHA, you're so stupid.” He laughs. I’m not stupid, it’s just that this place has a good reputation and since so many wishes come true here, I may as well give it a go as well. Except… do I really have in mind something that I can wish for?

“Hey…since this place is so peaceful, don’t you reckon it’ll be a good idea to sit down under a tree and eat lunch?”

“I thought Kim Jaejoong only liked sitting in classy restaurants and eating expensive food.”

“No. Although the common life is smelly and uncomfortable, they can do some amazing things such as having a nice picnic and eating nice food. Plus, expensive food doesn’t always taste good. I remember a long time ago, I would roam around the common streets of Seoul and try out lots of food.”

“So the only thing you like about the common life is the food?”

“I guess so.”

“So you never actually experienced living life as a commoner and living under a cheap home?”

“I have, it was really depressing.” So I guess this g

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sweetdreamerz #1
Chapter 53: How many chapters is the original story actually & how many chapters is the new version do you intend to write? Correct me if I'm wrong. Is it 5 chapters for first update & then all remaining chapters on second updates? Or 5 chapters at first update & after that 1 chapter for each updates till we met the continuation?
It just that I've been desperately waiting to know the answer for all my curiosity. It's been a long painful wait before to finally come to where we are now (well I just found this FF yesterday, so that's wouldn't apply for me). & if you rewrite the story, it would be too painful to wait for the exact moments again before any of the questions being answer. Because I'm dying to know (honestly I do feel like that).
But if you really must do it, even if I fell very reluctant, I'll give you my full support. Because I know it wouldn't be easy & you gonna need supports & loves from all your subbies to keep you strong. So... Go for it (^_^).
MaivxiaKhaab
#2
It will also be nice instead of first POV, make it third POV. I get kind of tired of reading stories it "I and me and mine and my" all day. I think most romance stories these days have a female POV most of the time. AAAAAND, get rid of oppa and other Korean honorifics. I know they are in Korea and all, but do you see real life authors adding honorifics? Even if the author is Asian and lives in an Asian country? If you want, you can add it in...but not too much.
MaivxiaKhaab
#3
Chapter 53: It's good in my opinion that you are going to rewrite this. I don't care about the cliche stuff most fan fiction stories have, LOL. I'm a hopeless romantic *cries*. Hopefully, the rewrite will be better, because once you mature, you start to think better than your teenage self. Hopefully, it will be a bit better this time. I'm excited to see what you got! Even if you decide to quit this story, I will still remember it as this one weird long story that took forever to complete .
fallenangel #4
Chapter 53: I got scared seeing the title of the update but now I'm relieved to see that you "just" wanna rewrite it :D
I will still be there reading your updates!
hwaiting!
mykomik #5
Chapter 49: Pleaseeee updateeee sooooooon
hazel_marie13
#6
Chapter 49: I hate Jaejoong for treating her like he owns her! I pity Ka Eun for falling in love with a kind of guy like him, it must have been better if she falls for a man like Myungsoo! I really like for Myungsoo to make him get jealous more for it may result to Jaejoong realizing he likes her or not and just treat her as someone he owns because she's his wife! Or it will be better for them to divorce so that Jaejoong will realize she let go of a nice girl like Ka Eun but I doubt it since Ka Eun doesn't want to but who knows in the future! Will surely wait for your next update to know what will happen next, update soon :)
mykomik #7
Chapter 49: up date pleaseeeeee
suhashiny
#8
Chapter 49: KIM JAEJOONG STOP TREATING HER LIKE A THING YOU OWN!!!!! Don't you dare do that to her!!!!!
BTW, new reader here :)
Story is AWESOME!!!!!
I really want Myungsoo to make him really really really really jealous....... Is that possible??
fallenangel #9
Chapter 49: I really hope Jae cares for the right reasons and not because he is just being possessive and seeing her as one of his belongings. :) Understand your writer's block but I hope you will find some inspiration again soon :D
MaivxiaKhaab
#10
Chapter 49: No need to be sorry! Writer's block is a sin. I hope you continue to update. I don't like stories that are discontinued because...THERE ARE STILL SO MUCH QUESTIONS THAT NEED TO BE ANSWERED. *cough* Excuse me. Glad that you're back.