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A Mischievous Marriage
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Chapter two- Home?

‘Mianhae Ahjussi, but I think I’m already at home. No one lives in this household apart from me, so there isn’t a Miss Ahn Sun Hee here.’

‘You are Ahn Sun Hee.’

‘What? No, I’m Yoon Ka Eu-’

‘No time to explain, get in the car.’ I ignore him. ‘Miss Ahn Sun Hee, please follow me.’ I ignore him again, is he a kidnapper? I’m still young, I can’t die yet.

‘No.’ I finally say.

‘I need to take you home now. Master Ahn and Mrs Ahn ordered me to take you home as soon as possible.’

‘Who the hell are they?’

‘Your parents.’ My parents? I don’t have parents, I don’t even have a family, nor friends.

‘Parents don’t exist in my life.’

‘Miss Ahn Sun Hee, can you please let us take you home straight away.’ I stare at him and yawn, I’m tired, I still need to wake up early tomorrow to open up Jae Eun and bake more morning fresh vanilla cupcakes with different icing, oh and rainbow cookies and…

‘Miss Ahn Sun Hee, I will patiently wait here until you agree to go back to your own home.’

‘Can you please stop calling me Ahn Sun Hee? Ahjussi, I don’t know is this some joke you’re pulling but I’m really tired and I need to go back to sleep. So for the meantime, good night and I hope you sleep well too.’ I place my hand on the door handle about to close it when I hear him speak up.

‘Stop, Miss Ahn Sun Hee, if you don’t believe me, I have this.’ He hands me his identification card. ‘Call me Butler Gong.’

HAHA GONG. Wait, what’s so funny? Am I really speaking to a butler from the richest Ahn family I’ve heard of? The wealthy Ahn family who sells cosmetics? The finest in Korea? I rub my eyes and pinch my own arm.

‘Miss Ahn Sun Hee, you aren’t dreaming. Please follow me into the car right now so I can take you home, it doesn’t matter what you’re wearing.’ Butler Gong serenely says, bowing slightly. Without thinking about the whole messed up situation anymore, I follow him and seat myself in a beautiful, expensive, black car.

♘Jaejoong’s P.O.V 

I pace back and forth on the expensive carpet at the Ahn residence, they invited me to have dinner just a while ago, so I thought I’d stay and behave for a while. Not until they started to go all ape and crazy about their ‘long lost daughter.’

Where the is my mother and father, like Mr and Mrs Ahn’s daughter has anything to do with them. Aish, I’m not allowed to go home yet, not without my parent’s permission. The problem is, they’re nowhere in sight.

I bet you the daughter is a fake, or maybe just some random greedy chick fraud. You know all the money the Ahn family has, and of course, my very own Kim family. It’s like midnight, I’m bloody hungry. We didn’t even have desert tonight.

Hastily, I walk to the kitchen to request some food.

‘Mr Kim Jaejoong, would you like to request some food to eat?’ The chef asks. WELL ACTUALLY, I JUST WANTED TO SPY ON THE Y AHJUMMA COOKING AND SHAKING HER BECAUSE IT TURNS ME ON. No , of course I came to ask for ing food.

‘Vanilla cupcake please.’

‘Please wait a while for us to prepare the most delicious cupcake, especially for you, Kim Jaejoong.’

‘Kay.’ Honestly, no cupcakes are as delicious as the girl’s ones. I met her when, I secretly ran away from home just to flirt with some commoners, or maybe just run away from home since it's so boring, unfortunately she hated me. Actually, who cares, I didn’t like her either bu

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sweetdreamerz #1
Chapter 53: How many chapters is the original story actually & how many chapters is the new version do you intend to write? Correct me if I'm wrong. Is it 5 chapters for first update & then all remaining chapters on second updates? Or 5 chapters at first update & after that 1 chapter for each updates till we met the continuation?
It just that I've been desperately waiting to know the answer for all my curiosity. It's been a long painful wait before to finally come to where we are now (well I just found this FF yesterday, so that's wouldn't apply for me). & if you rewrite the story, it would be too painful to wait for the exact moments again before any of the questions being answer. Because I'm dying to know (honestly I do feel like that).
But if you really must do it, even if I fell very reluctant, I'll give you my full support. Because I know it wouldn't be easy & you gonna need supports & loves from all your subbies to keep you strong. So... Go for it (^_^).
MaivxiaKhaab
#2
It will also be nice instead of first POV, make it third POV. I get kind of tired of reading stories it "I and me and mine and my" all day. I think most romance stories these days have a female POV most of the time. AAAAAND, get rid of oppa and other Korean honorifics. I know they are in Korea and all, but do you see real life authors adding honorifics? Even if the author is Asian and lives in an Asian country? If you want, you can add it in...but not too much.
MaivxiaKhaab
#3
Chapter 53: It's good in my opinion that you are going to rewrite this. I don't care about the cliche stuff most fan fiction stories have, LOL. I'm a hopeless romantic *cries*. Hopefully, the rewrite will be better, because once you mature, you start to think better than your teenage self. Hopefully, it will be a bit better this time. I'm excited to see what you got! Even if you decide to quit this story, I will still remember it as this one weird long story that took forever to complete .
fallenangel #4
Chapter 53: I got scared seeing the title of the update but now I'm relieved to see that you "just" wanna rewrite it :D
I will still be there reading your updates!
hwaiting!
mykomik #5
Chapter 49: Pleaseeee updateeee sooooooon
hazel_marie13
#6
Chapter 49: I hate Jaejoong for treating her like he owns her! I pity Ka Eun for falling in love with a kind of guy like him, it must have been better if she falls for a man like Myungsoo! I really like for Myungsoo to make him get jealous more for it may result to Jaejoong realizing he likes her or not and just treat her as someone he owns because she's his wife! Or it will be better for them to divorce so that Jaejoong will realize she let go of a nice girl like Ka Eun but I doubt it since Ka Eun doesn't want to but who knows in the future! Will surely wait for your next update to know what will happen next, update soon :)
mykomik #7
Chapter 49: up date pleaseeeeee
suhashiny
#8
Chapter 49: KIM JAEJOONG STOP TREATING HER LIKE A THING YOU OWN!!!!! Don't you dare do that to her!!!!!
BTW, new reader here :)
Story is AWESOME!!!!!
I really want Myungsoo to make him really really really really jealous....... Is that possible??
fallenangel #9
Chapter 49: I really hope Jae cares for the right reasons and not because he is just being possessive and seeing her as one of his belongings. :) Understand your writer's block but I hope you will find some inspiration again soon :D
MaivxiaKhaab
#10
Chapter 49: No need to be sorry! Writer's block is a sin. I hope you continue to update. I don't like stories that are discontinued because...THERE ARE STILL SO MUCH QUESTIONS THAT NEED TO BE ANSWERED. *cough* Excuse me. Glad that you're back.