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A Mischievous Marriage
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Chapter three: Get off my bed!

♘Jaejoong’s P.O.V

‘Mrs and Mr Ahn… I’m sorry but, I’m really not Ahn Sun Hee. I’m a girl with no parents and my name is Yoon Ka Eun.’

Yoon.

Ka.

Eun?

Yoon Ka Eun as in the owner of Jae Eun? Does she still remember me? Actually, I never sent her my contact details since my mother won’t let me. You’ve got to be kidding me bro, this , is friggin Yoon Ka Eun? Come to think of it, she looks awfully familiar and the way she acts towards me…I’m keeping my identity as ‘Han Jaejoon’ a secret. She needs to acknowledge me as the y mother chucker first!

‘You’re our long lost daughter, Sun Hee!’ Mr and Mrs Ahn says.

‘I know it sounds godly to be here, and have everything since I’m poor, but you’re not joking right? I don’t want to be called a fraud and a fake.’ She replies, still standing there with her fluffy pink slippers and teddy bear pyjamas.

trying to act like she’s a very kind person, I bet you deep down she really wants all the money!

‘We… you look a lot like your father, Sun Hee.’ I glance over at her father’s face, then back at hers. True. After all, she does look like an ugly masculine creature.

Fine I take that back. She just looks like some typical cheap okay? ‘We also have DNA proof.’

‘So I really am Ahn Sun Hee?’

‘Yes, my Sun Hee!’ Mr Ahn says, embracing her into a hug. This is like some stupid family reunion I see only in dramas.‘Umma, Appa? Can you please call me Ka Eun, it’s been with me for years.’

‘That’s a pretty name! I’m afraid I’ll have to try and get used to it.’ Mrs Ahn smiles.

After the whole family reunion , I walk over towards my parents. ‘Gee umma and appa, how has Mr and Mrs Ahn’s daughter got anything to do with you? Can’t we go home?’ My mother is staring at me with teary eyes. ‘We’re such good friends with the Ahn family! You’re telling us not to care!’

‘I want to go home, gee.’

‘We’ll go home in another two hours, the Ahn family has some important things with us to discuss.’ Oh my god, how about I jump off the balcony instead.

I have to lurk around here for another two bloody hours? I'm ing exhausted... and not to mention I have been doing some intensive exercises with different women in bed for the passed week, frankly speaking.

‘Appa, Umma, I'm seriously so tired. 

‘Do you want a room arranged for you so you can rest?’ Sounds like an alright idea. ‘Kay then.’

Actually, I have two hours to mess around with that stupid girl. 

♙Ka Eun’s P.O.V

I can’t believe this is happening to me. I, I Yoon Ka Eun, am now the long lost Ahn Sun Hee of the richest Ahn family in the world.

Oh my god.

No more stupid Jae Eun vanilla cupcake and cookie !I follow Butler Gong around the gigantic mansion, before showing me a beautiful bedroom. The bed is huge, with soft comfortable pillows, it looks like a princess bed. There is also a nice bathroom, with a spa and a huge bathtub, nearly the size of a swimming pool! The walls are decorated with beautiful images and art, the room is extremely princess-like. Something that’d I really enjoy.

‘It’s beautiful!’ I gasp.

‘Please go to rest, if you wish.’ Butler Gong says, closing the door. The first thing I want to do, is to hop onto the bed and sleep, the softness embracing my back. I just want to pull up that warm blanket since it’s freezing in winter, most of all I want to lay my head on the soft pillow!

I run towards my bed, flinging myself towards the soft mattress. What the hell? This bed isn’t even comfortable.

‘ing ouch, you fat !’ someone yells.

joong.

‘You’re so bloody heavy, you’re killing me, MISS AHN SUN HEE OR YOON KA EUN.’

‘Why are you lying on my bed? GET OFF, IT’S MINE!’

‘That’s why I’m lying on it.’ He replies. These words seem awfully familiar to me, I swear he’s like the reincarnation of Han Jaejoon who supposedly got eaten up by a shark. Come to think about it, joong looks like a shark!Oh my god!

‘You have your own bed, don’t you?’ I ask.

‘I don’t live in the Ahn household, I’m the ing y Kim Jaejoong. You heard me, KIM, KIM, KIM!’ He repeats, still lying on my bed.‘By the way, your bed is actually really comfortable.’

‘Of course, specially made for me, so can you please get off now you freaking !’ I yell, I can’t stand this !

‘Awhh, isn’t your bed a bit too big for just one person to sleep on?’ He seductively says, winking.‘Are you sick in the mind?’ I ask, I can probably puke right now but it's like I'm trying extemely hard to hold it in.

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sweetdreamerz #1
Chapter 53: How many chapters is the original story actually & how many chapters is the new version do you intend to write? Correct me if I'm wrong. Is it 5 chapters for first update & then all remaining chapters on second updates? Or 5 chapters at first update & after that 1 chapter for each updates till we met the continuation?
It just that I've been desperately waiting to know the answer for all my curiosity. It's been a long painful wait before to finally come to where we are now (well I just found this FF yesterday, so that's wouldn't apply for me). & if you rewrite the story, it would be too painful to wait for the exact moments again before any of the questions being answer. Because I'm dying to know (honestly I do feel like that).
But if you really must do it, even if I fell very reluctant, I'll give you my full support. Because I know it wouldn't be easy & you gonna need supports & loves from all your subbies to keep you strong. So... Go for it (^_^).
MaivxiaKhaab
#2
It will also be nice instead of first POV, make it third POV. I get kind of tired of reading stories it "I and me and mine and my" all day. I think most romance stories these days have a female POV most of the time. AAAAAND, get rid of oppa and other Korean honorifics. I know they are in Korea and all, but do you see real life authors adding honorifics? Even if the author is Asian and lives in an Asian country? If you want, you can add it in...but not too much.
MaivxiaKhaab
#3
Chapter 53: It's good in my opinion that you are going to rewrite this. I don't care about the cliche stuff most fan fiction stories have, LOL. I'm a hopeless romantic *cries*. Hopefully, the rewrite will be better, because once you mature, you start to think better than your teenage self. Hopefully, it will be a bit better this time. I'm excited to see what you got! Even if you decide to quit this story, I will still remember it as this one weird long story that took forever to complete .
fallenangel #4
Chapter 53: I got scared seeing the title of the update but now I'm relieved to see that you "just" wanna rewrite it :D
I will still be there reading your updates!
hwaiting!
mykomik #5
Chapter 49: Pleaseeee updateeee sooooooon
hazel_marie13
#6
Chapter 49: I hate Jaejoong for treating her like he owns her! I pity Ka Eun for falling in love with a kind of guy like him, it must have been better if she falls for a man like Myungsoo! I really like for Myungsoo to make him get jealous more for it may result to Jaejoong realizing he likes her or not and just treat her as someone he owns because she's his wife! Or it will be better for them to divorce so that Jaejoong will realize she let go of a nice girl like Ka Eun but I doubt it since Ka Eun doesn't want to but who knows in the future! Will surely wait for your next update to know what will happen next, update soon :)
mykomik #7
Chapter 49: up date pleaseeeeee
suhashiny
#8
Chapter 49: KIM JAEJOONG STOP TREATING HER LIKE A THING YOU OWN!!!!! Don't you dare do that to her!!!!!
BTW, new reader here :)
Story is AWESOME!!!!!
I really want Myungsoo to make him really really really really jealous....... Is that possible??
fallenangel #9
Chapter 49: I really hope Jae cares for the right reasons and not because he is just being possessive and seeing her as one of his belongings. :) Understand your writer's block but I hope you will find some inspiration again soon :D
MaivxiaKhaab
#10
Chapter 49: No need to be sorry! Writer's block is a sin. I hope you continue to update. I don't like stories that are discontinued because...THERE ARE STILL SO MUCH QUESTIONS THAT NEED TO BE ANSWERED. *cough* Excuse me. Glad that you're back.