CHAPTER 28: 1ST DAY OF OUTING PART 2

OTHER SIDE OF LOVE SERIES 2: FORBIDDEN RELATIONSHIP

HYUN JOONG & YOUNG SAENG POV

They were gone straight to their room as they finished eating their lunch since they

arrived in busan at 3 in the afternoon,,, Young saeng went to give a sight on the sea from

the balcony of their room.. They are still in silent mode....Hyun joong took his shower to 

lessen the heaviness of his body,,, and lessen the stress that he was now encountering....

"Young saeng was in deep sigh and sigh and sigh.....an outing..how can she again

interrupt?  he thought to himself,,,He saw the two, jiyoung and kyu jong playing around

near the water but he didnt mind them since he was focus with their situation with

nicole... he snap out when someone's hand interlock infront of his belly...He glare on side

and just found hyun joong behind him..he talked in soft but yet cold way,, stop hugging

me,, they might see us,,,and remove hyun joong's hand...

"Hyun joong carressed young saeng's both arm stoking up and down,,, take your shower,,, i

prepared the heater already...

"Young saeng bowed his head and turn to face hyun joong and asked in gloom,,,hyun joong

ah,,why do we need to be like this?

"Hyun joong just gave a sigh and smiled forcefully....wae? what do you mean,,, what are

you talking about? dont think too much,,,he hugged young saeng to comfort him,,, i love

you and you love me,, that is my concern,, nothing else...let's just be prepare for in the

future...Go have your shower now...so that we can rest early for tomorrow...

"I love you,, you really spoiled me a lot so i was just like,,,,,young saeng stop as hyun

joong interrupt,,,keumanhae,,,i love you too..we've been through a lot of trials,,so we

can in the future..

 

JIYOUNG POV

she was enjoying playing with kyu jong,,, well yes,, how they become close all of a

sudden?,,who knows...?

They were enjoying taking snap shots and so whatever,,,Jiyoung had an unintentionally  

glance on young saeng at the balcony of the house,, he didnt mind him and continue to 

play with kyu jong,, 

At a second look he saw someone behind young saeng,, not clear because the person is

covered by young saeng,,but she was sure that young saeng shared a room with hyun

joong, Hmmm? is that hyun joong hugging young saeng? she thought to himself....

 

Kyu jong saw jiyoung looking to somewhere he trace it and found the two from afar but

clearly saw the face of young saeng...He get the attention of jiyoung to prevent her

looking at the balcony...Jiyoung ah,, kaja,, its getting cold already...

"ahh ye.. chamkan,, take photo on me first,,,kyu jong took a shot on jiyoung before

going...He checked the photo first and starts to walk...Kyu jong ah,,, is young saeng and

hyun joong really that close?

"The two of them... yes they are....kyu jong confidently answered...They were like

brothers... i am always been jealous with their closeness,,he joked..

"wae? jiyoung asked..

"I am young saeng's childhood bestfriend,, but when he transferred in my shool in

highschool he had been close with hyun joong,,,Hyun joong is our student head back then

and he take good care of young saeng since he was new and most of the students bullies

young saeng,,,i was so busy so i didnt had the chance to look for him,, so hyun joong takes

the responsibilities...Kyu jong said in details and laugh,,,

"Jinjja.. hyun joong oppa seems too nice to young saeng...huh..hyun joong oppa treats

young saeng oppa like a little girl...jiyoung said

"Kyu jong drop his jaw with the comment? ani,,,hyun joong said that young saeng is too

weak so he had to take care of him because i cant do that,,, anyway,,, hyun joong treats

us the same its just that young saeng is really a spoiled bratt you know so all of us have

been doing nice to him...What the heck am i talking about,, hope you'll take my

explanation well...he thought..

"Ahhhh i see...jiyoung nodded continuously,,,

"We were like brothers since we are only son in the family... we treat young saeng the

maknae so he always with hyun joong the eldest one....kyu jong joked again and laugh...

"Jiyoung sighed,,, i just wish to have real brothers and treat me well...and protect

me,,,she mumbled and pouted...

"You are only daughter? kyu jong asked...

"Ani i have unnie.. she is already married,,,haisshhhh,, that jerk,, she married someone..

she was already meant to marry a son of a rich family but she was a year older so she

choses to drop the arrangement and marry another man,, and now im in line to get

married with that unknown guy...jiyoung complained..

"Eo jinjja...the bad luck is yours,,,marry someone you dont know...anyway all of us are

like that,, kyu jong laugh,,,i havent seen my fiance too.. being rich is remarkably just a

bad luck...

"de you are right its kinda tiring..i envy nicole for having a fiance like hyun joong oppa at

least she knows her fiance already..jiyoung said..

"De? maybe... i dont think she was lucky....kyu jong mumbled in low tone..ayway... can i

offer my self to be your oppa? he added..

"ehhh... o-oppa? jiyoung widened her eyes,,

"I mean you said you want to have older brother... i can be your older brother then... kyu

jong explained..

"ahhhh.. jinjja... so you were my older brother now... promise? jiyoung smiled brightly..

ye older brother..aehh,,, he thought to her mind..

"Promise... kyu jong response and raise his right hand...

"they went in the house and separate ways as they go to their own rooms....

 

KYU JONG POV

As he opened the door and step inside their room..jungmin threw the pillow to him,,,

Yahhhh!!!! he yelled...

"yah! yah! yah!! come here you have to explain.... jungmin said giving gestures to kyu

jong to sit on the bed..

"wae? he asked...

"Tell us,, how did you get closer to jiyoung? i thought you were a great enemy of her....

jungmin asked again anticipating for the answer..

"Molla...kyu jong simple response and get inside the bathroom to washed and go to bed...

"Yahhh come back here......jungmin shouted...

"Jungmin ah just let him go,, one day he will gonna tell us about it..hyungjun said while

busy playing with something...

"Kyu jong came out from the bathroom and go straight to the bed and just ignore

jungmin...

"Jungmin still pestering kyu jong,, hyung jun pulled jungmin and drag him on bed and put

blanket on him,,, you sleep now arrasseo just ask him next time,, he was tired and

exhausted playing with jiyoung...

"Aeshhhh arrasseo.... jungmin agreed but anooyed and not contented,,,,kyu jong ah,,, he

called once again...hyungjun turn off the light and go to bed.....

"Aehhhhhh!!!!!! get ready tomorrow i wont leave you till you give me the  answer....

jungmin grinned in dark room...

 

HYUN JOONG & YOUNG SAENG POV

..Young saeng took his bath and hyun joong go to bed already just waiting for young saeng

to come out and sleep...

"Young saeng came out after 15 minutes and sitted beside hyun joong...he was drying his

hair...

"Hyun joong carressed young saeng's back giving him gestures to come over him,,,Young

saeng lean closer to him,,

"Hyun joong get the towel that young saeng was using in drying his hair and put it on the

side table..He turn off the light and turn on the lamp shade...He get on the bed hugging

young saeng and gave a peck on lips...

"Hyun joong ah,, young saeng mention in soft tone..

"Hyun joong gave another peck and kissed young saeng so passionately and release after

they lost air to gain,,, don't mind nicole ok...just enjoy yourself tomorrow do whatever

you want you dont have to pretend and,, just dont kiss me infront of them...hyun joong

joked that makes young saeng smile revealing his dimple,,,

"How can i kiss you infront of them, am i that nuts to do that,, when did i ever kissed you

infront of them? young saeng asked..

"Dont you remember? when nicole came in your condo,, when sungmin came also..hyun

joong mention the time they played behind nicole...

"Yahhh i didnt kiss you,,,,,ani did we kiss cant remember it,, young saeng confused..

"whatever...i will looking forward for your cute smile tomorrow arrasseo? hyun joong

teased

"Let's see... young saeng response and smiled again,,, he pulled hyun joong's head closer to

him giving him a sign to kiss him,,,

"Hyun joong didnt waste the time and do whatever young saeng wants him to do with

pulling his head close...He kissed him softly like before..since no one will dare to disturb

at the point of time,, didnt waste the chance to be with one another,,knowing that the

next day or night it wasnt this free anymore...Hyun joong make his way to do what he can

do for that night and exhausted themselves makes them sleep after...

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....Jiyoung and kyu jong lol,,,i want to make them out but yes im still in process of that coz i want to focus with hyun saeng..hope the update for them is a bit enjoyable...though not that long...

"To all of you my reader and regular commentor kamsahamnida,,, i hope every questions in your mind can find answers in every update...im reading all your comments and makes me smile and im getting ideas from your comments too....

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LovelyYS #1
Chapter 115: Thank you for welcome back! I wish you would write more Hyunsaeng stories! :-)
Lotus_Girl
#2
Chapter 56: More I read more I become scar that KHJ and his BF maybe get separated :'( shureo >_<
Georgettejolie #3
Gonna read this story
khelly07_grace #4
Chapter 114: i've read your story multiple times already and yet for me it's like i am always reading it for the first time....can't get enough of this ff....the best. my favorite....thanks for sharing....please continue writing esp. hyunsaeng fanfic....
liliano_gh20
#5
Chapter 114: Woah! I just finished reading this now,it was really one of the best stories I've ever read!!Thanks a lot!! ^_^ Ahh I listened to "Hold me for a while" while I was reading this story & wow it really suits this story,hehe I think the singer sang this song just for this amazing story of yours!! ;)^^
I could find some of your amazing stories & read all of them & truly enjoyed every single one of them,really appreciate your wonderful work & want to tell you that I'm one of the biggest fans of you & your super lovely stories,I'll keep on supporting your stories no matter what so pls keep on writing!! :)
Mmm but actually I want ask you for something,I can't find all your stories(not even in your profile) :( I really want to read all of them so can you pls let me know how I can find all of them?!I'll be really thankful if you do!! You are my Fav author here,Fighting~ ;) ^^
yaya89 #6
This is my 3rd time reading this lovely story and I'm sure that I'm going to read it more and more bcz I can't have enough of it .. to be honest with you I really learned a lot from your story about love and about how we can come over our problems.. I really never been interested with this kind of stories I mean the () ones but this one made me appreciate love in every way bcz its the most important thing in any relationship.. you're a great writer I love all of your stories I keep looking for them .. and I hope that you will write more hyunsaeng fics bcz you have the talent and bcz I would love to read them all ..wish you the best and sorry for the long comment but I didn't really say enough bcz I really really loved this story and love you too bcz you're awsome
LovelyYS #7
Chapter 8: I love this story when have been reading for 2nd times and repeat to read it again today while I am waiting for next chapters about Peek and Other Side of Love stories. It made me tearing about forced them separate couple by their both fathers, really SAD and HAPPY when family accepted them return together couple, BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!
minayoungshi1103 #8
Chapter 108: Sis very thank you to this story.. it makes me aangry, sad and happy.. I really really love their story. .I keep Imagining while im reading this..
irendy
#9
really ThanKyu for this story.
when i saw this 114 chapters, i thought it was really really long.
after a few chapters, i found it boring ( sorry for saying that) cuz the character of YoungSaeng. He is kind of easy cry and dependent too much on HJ. He cant do anything w/o HJ on his side. and HJ is always there for helping him and comforting him. etc. I dont like either Nic or JiJoung.

i decided to drop this fic since it's long and due to my laziness.
I searched for another HyunSaeng of you aka Areu501Kyuie and i found Other side of love. the same character of YS i hated but i finished it immediately cuz it kinda funnier than the previous one. Sorry again it just my feeling.
I found another sequel of this fic: Love you Yeowonhi, i like this sequel best.
I like the 2 kids cuz the are really cute ang Mungsoo is the key of this fic. as we can see he witnessed the two father ang make them feel ease....
sorry for beating around the bush. cuz there is some point that I cant get since it was mentioned in The Forbidden Relationship.

So I reread this fic.keke

I like the way u tie the knot and untie it during the fic. A happy ending for the couple after many difficulties n obstacle.

I like Seeing my HyunSaeng on your point of view.
last word, I love your fic and waiting for your upcoming fic ^^
Goemas12 #10
Chapter 111: This story was wonderful all the drama the love the sacrafice the commitment
was amazing i cried when they struggling to stay together
so happy they ended up together happy and in love
thanks for writing such an amazing story