CHAPTER 10: IM LATE

OTHER SIDE OF LOVE SERIES 2: FORBIDDEN RELATIONSHIP

 

continuation: previous chapter;
 
"Yaahhh am i dog? hyun joong shouted...
 
"de you look like one..you have big eyes...young saeng laugh again..
 
"ah ye ye ye.. kurae...call me dog as you want it...hyun joong rolled his eyes and pushed
 
young saeng away jokingly..
 
"arrasseo mianhae...dont get mad,, i will not call you dog,,,just puppy...young saeng
 
teased again with his sweet voice and showed his dimpled cheek...
 
"Hyun joong glared once and threw a tantrums over young saeng,,,go...i will never kiss you
 
again...he added covered his face with the small pillow beside them..
 
"Aigoo,,, my puppy is mad already...let me see your cute face..young saeng keeps
 
removing the pillow but hyun joong keeps tighting on holding the pillow..
 
"arrasseo.. i will not give you kiss then...young saeng said jokingly and make his self away
 
from hyun joong and layed his back to the other end of the sofa again..
 
"Hyun joong threw the pillow on the floor beside and sitted,,Yaahhh!!!! are you serious?
 
he yelled...
 
"wae? you dont want me to see your face..so it means you dont like a kiss then..isnt it?
 
young saeng answered but just making a prank on hyun joong..
 
"yaahhhh!!! hyun joong yelled again..im just testing you wether you will give up or not..
 
but i was disappointed...hyun joong make a sad face and pouted....
 
"Showing your face like that..aigooo.. cant you live without my kiss? young saeng
 
continuously teasing hyun joong while playing on his phone..
 
"Who said that i cant live without your kiss..can you? hyun joong threw the question
 
back...
 
"Me? i can...young saeng answered still enjoying on hyun joong being irritated with his
 
prank..
 
"Hyun joong asked again..can you refuse to this tasty lips?,,,then his lips 
 
seductively...
 
"eewwweee..young saeng showed a grouse reaction over hyun joong and turned back on
 
playing his phone..
 
"Hyun joong got back on his position and starts to hum in a song...
 
"Young saeng crawled over hyun joong's top,,leaving 2 inches between their faces ,are you
 
mad now?
 
"Hyun joong suddenly grab him and kissed him shockingly saying..ani.. i just thought to
 
tricked you out and make you give in...he smiled
 
"Young saeng slap him on front shoulder near the chest.. rolling his eyes, you silly,, i
 
thought you were mad already...he keeps pulling himself away but hyun joong keeps
 
pulling him closer..get off of me you cheater..
 
"shirrheo!!! hyun joong refuse not releasing him till they fall on the floor,,,young saeng
 
first then he grab hyun joong neckline so he rolled against young saeng along..
 
"ouchhhh!!! my back!!! i think...i think...awhhh....young saeng hold his back in hurt...
 
"Eooo did you hurt? hyun joong asked worriedly checking the back of young saeng and start
 
to panic..
 
"Hyun joong ah...young saeng frowned still giving an hurting facial reaction...
 
"eodie! eodie let me see...!!apa? jinjja apa? he asked doesnt know what to do...
 
"Young saeng then spoke normally pulling hyun joong neckline,,,Ani..its not hurt,, just my
 
revenge,,,then he flatted a kiss on hyun joong lips and release after seconds...
 
"eo!!! you mean just a trick? hyun joong widening his big eyes and grinned..aeshhh
 
jinjja..you know how worried i am?
 
"Dee i know? i saw your face transformed into an ugly one making your wrinkles out of too
 
much worry,,,young saeng joked around,, 
 
"tsskkk ahhh ok you made a revenge huh,, hyun joong smirked and they laugh,, now my
 
turn,,,he said and flatted his lips to young saengs and kissed him and starts to trailed down
 
to young saeng's waist down to the thighs,,,running his lips over the neck and back to the
 
lips..releasing it if needed to get some air and if needed to talk..
 
"Yaahhh!! arent we going to the room? young saeng suggested..
 
"Gwaenchanha! i wont waste any time going to the room it takes minutes and i dont want
 
to break this scene....hyun joong pulled out and said and kissed him back again..
 
"What if someone will pop out on the door? and saw us like this..young saeng talked
 
again..
 
"No one will see us coz no one will dare to get in here...hyun joong answered while
 
trailing over his neck..
 
"Just what if...young saeng keeps talking with his IF.
 
"did you gave your unlock code to the door to anyone? hyun joong questioned again not
 
breaking his kiss and hungry lips over young saeng..
 
"No..just with you...young saeng answered,,But its cold in this floor.. the bed is much
 
warmer,,,,
 
"No more buts,, later you will not feel the cold of this floor i'll make it warm then..hyun
 
joong continue with his business..
 
"Hyun joong ah...why you always seems to be hungry over me? young saeng questioned
 
again...
 
"Because you are my favorite dish to taste and makes me overcome my hungriness...hyun
 
joong answered again..
 
"Hyun joong ah....young saeng called again..
 
"Just be quiet.. another word and you'll  be paying more today,,,hyun joong threatened as
 
he explore young saeng lips and inside before he can hear another words to excuse..
 
"Hyun joong pushed the center table away from them to make their location more
 
spacious..and hyun getting more amd more excited...
 
"Suddenly young saeng shouted out so loud,, hyun joong ah yaahhh!!!
 
"Hyun joong stopped and immediately looked at young saeng...wae tto???,,i havent done
 
anything yet...
 
"That's not what i mean young saeng replied in low voice
 
"Then why? hyun joong asked at the same time
 
"...look...young saeng pointed at the wall clock that was located at the upper space of the
 
door of the room..
 
"What? hyun joong puzzled by what young saeng trying to say..
 
"The time..young saeng response..
 
"Hyun joong look at the time,,he sighed and bowed his head over young saeng's chest..the
 
time is 6:30 and its already evening then..i thought you had seen a ghost and keeps
 
watching us..we're getting,,,why bringing that clock all of a sudden in the midst of
 
our...he stopped and shook his head,,,ahhhh!! jajjungna,, young saeng ah....we're already
 
there..why need to interrupt and cut it out...
 
"Ani isnt your dinner with your parents is 7 in the evening? young saeng asked and stood up
 
lifting hyun joong along..
 
"What dinner?..Hyun joong asked with his head down and suddenly snapped out and
 
remembered...ah matta..i forgot it already...He stood up immediately and rushed over
 
the door..
 
"Young saeng chased him until the shoe stand near the door..
 
"Hyun joong stop and went back to young saeng,,i forgot,,he kissed him once again and
 
said..ill be back early and we'll continue bout that dont sleep early...and rushed to the
 
door and went to his unit to prepare...
 
"Young saeng sat back to the sofa....and wondering around the empty like box now that
 
hyun joong is gone for that dinner...
 
 
"After 20 minutes the door opened and went to see who opened it since hyun joong left
 
already..
 
"Hyun joong ah,, young saeng mention who was in the door..why are you still here havent
 
off yet?
 
"Ani i just want to,,,,hyun joong stopped and just get closer to young saeng pulling the
 
waist towards him and kissed him for another time.....
 
"You have to go you're so late...young saeng spoke giving him a hand signal to go..Go Go
 
GO...
 
"arrasseo.. kiss me once more...hyun joong demanded..
 
"Aigoo..young saeng mumbled and just gave him another kiss...happy now? he asked..
 
"Satisfied...hyun joong smiled and go out with a rush since he stayed another 5 minutes
 
with young saeng...
 
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.....Mianhada but i dont know exactly what's happening with my lappy why i have a hard time opening AFF recently... but when open with my phone its not hard..
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LovelyYS #1
Chapter 115: Thank you for welcome back! I wish you would write more Hyunsaeng stories! :-)
Lotus_Girl
#2
Chapter 56: More I read more I become scar that KHJ and his BF maybe get separated :'( shureo >_<
Georgettejolie #3
Gonna read this story
khelly07_grace #4
Chapter 114: i've read your story multiple times already and yet for me it's like i am always reading it for the first time....can't get enough of this ff....the best. my favorite....thanks for sharing....please continue writing esp. hyunsaeng fanfic....
liliano_gh20
#5
Chapter 114: Woah! I just finished reading this now,it was really one of the best stories I've ever read!!Thanks a lot!! ^_^ Ahh I listened to "Hold me for a while" while I was reading this story & wow it really suits this story,hehe I think the singer sang this song just for this amazing story of yours!! ;)^^
I could find some of your amazing stories & read all of them & truly enjoyed every single one of them,really appreciate your wonderful work & want to tell you that I'm one of the biggest fans of you & your super lovely stories,I'll keep on supporting your stories no matter what so pls keep on writing!! :)
Mmm but actually I want ask you for something,I can't find all your stories(not even in your profile) :( I really want to read all of them so can you pls let me know how I can find all of them?!I'll be really thankful if you do!! You are my Fav author here,Fighting~ ;) ^^
yaya89 #6
This is my 3rd time reading this lovely story and I'm sure that I'm going to read it more and more bcz I can't have enough of it .. to be honest with you I really learned a lot from your story about love and about how we can come over our problems.. I really never been interested with this kind of stories I mean the () ones but this one made me appreciate love in every way bcz its the most important thing in any relationship.. you're a great writer I love all of your stories I keep looking for them .. and I hope that you will write more hyunsaeng fics bcz you have the talent and bcz I would love to read them all ..wish you the best and sorry for the long comment but I didn't really say enough bcz I really really loved this story and love you too bcz you're awsome
LovelyYS #7
Chapter 8: I love this story when have been reading for 2nd times and repeat to read it again today while I am waiting for next chapters about Peek and Other Side of Love stories. It made me tearing about forced them separate couple by their both fathers, really SAD and HAPPY when family accepted them return together couple, BEAUTIFUL STORY!!!
minayoungshi1103 #8
Chapter 108: Sis very thank you to this story.. it makes me aangry, sad and happy.. I really really love their story. .I keep Imagining while im reading this..
irendy
#9
really ThanKyu for this story.
when i saw this 114 chapters, i thought it was really really long.
after a few chapters, i found it boring ( sorry for saying that) cuz the character of YoungSaeng. He is kind of easy cry and dependent too much on HJ. He cant do anything w/o HJ on his side. and HJ is always there for helping him and comforting him. etc. I dont like either Nic or JiJoung.

i decided to drop this fic since it's long and due to my laziness.
I searched for another HyunSaeng of you aka Areu501Kyuie and i found Other side of love. the same character of YS i hated but i finished it immediately cuz it kinda funnier than the previous one. Sorry again it just my feeling.
I found another sequel of this fic: Love you Yeowonhi, i like this sequel best.
I like the 2 kids cuz the are really cute ang Mungsoo is the key of this fic. as we can see he witnessed the two father ang make them feel ease....
sorry for beating around the bush. cuz there is some point that I cant get since it was mentioned in The Forbidden Relationship.

So I reread this fic.keke

I like the way u tie the knot and untie it during the fic. A happy ending for the couple after many difficulties n obstacle.

I like Seeing my HyunSaeng on your point of view.
last word, I love your fic and waiting for your upcoming fic ^^
Goemas12 #10
Chapter 111: This story was wonderful all the drama the love the sacrafice the commitment
was amazing i cried when they struggling to stay together
so happy they ended up together happy and in love
thanks for writing such an amazing story